nice

This was really good and thoroughly enjoyed!

I've just started reading this (I know like a gazillion years later) but I'm hooked and enjoying it very much!

wow! great story! are you going to start the next part soon?

I like the original Cole better than this one, but I really liked this story! It was great. In fact, it was so great, it put me off from doing work. Damn.

But it was great.

great story i liked

Wonderful Story, I know you wrote it years ago, but it's great!

What a neat idea. I really enjoyed this story. It's interesting to see how Cole acts not knowing she's a future charmed one and just a random mortal that he's fallen in love with. Now that Grams is dead will the Charmed ones recieve their powers? I can't wait to read your sequal.

This was a really good story and I think that it was a really original idea to make Cole and Phoebe meet before the show started. I was wondering if you were making a sequel.

This was a really good story and I think that it was a really original idea to make Cole and Phoebe meet before the show started. I was wondering if you were making a sequel.

I've never read an AU that has Cole meeting Phoebe prior to them getting their powers! It's really original and well written!

good story

Just read your story. Loved it. Wondered if you had ever written a sequel. Thanks!

omg I liked this very much! I really cant wait for the second book. this is the best fanfic I have ever up the good work

This story is great. Please write sequel soon!