good story :).. I always loved Riku's character.. you got me teary eyed reading this...

This story's beautiful and I really admire Riku for turning her down... :) it was really good of him to give up a chance for everything he wanted for his friend and it was really nice of Kairi to be so worried about him :)

The stuff with Meg was deep. I don't believe that Kairi never realised how much he loved her especially after those vows but even if she did I doubt she'd comment it would ruin too much...

This is a cool story :) I especially like how you write Sora's chracter. You make him a lot more tolerable than the cannon one :D

That was a bittersweet ending for me, but forget about it, I'm not a SoKai fan. But, it was realistic, though, and I really liked that. It wasn't predictable, it wasn't the old-fashioned chick flick-y kind of ending. And that's always refreshing to have in a fic. So, in the end, although I feel sorry for Riku, this was an all right ending.

Aw, I feel sorry for Riku now. All those beautiful words came out of his mouth, and for all Kairi knew, he was just roleplaying. Hm...By the way, that part when Meg mistook Riku to be Kairi's fiance reminded me of "The Wedding Singer." Not sure if you've ever seen that movie, but it's good, and it kinda has a plot similar to this one. Similar but not exact, of course. I really like this story, though. XD

I think this story is entertaining so far. I like how Riku was talking about his life being a cliche, cuz it's kinda true, actually. XD But, I wonder what will happen, and if he can take on two tasks at once.

Wow, I really, really liked this! :]

The ending was bittersweet, but it was good.

Oh wow!

This was suberbly written, and I

must say that it was one of the most

enjoyable fics I've read.

I also liked the whole ' cliche '

theme running through as it was

very effective.

And wow! The ending just blew me off.

I was pretty certain that there would

be some ' I object ' or some other

intervention.

:D

Brilliant Job!

Keep up the great work!

I LOVE IT! I love it all!

The ending was perfect.

You had great pacing and everything flowed quite smoothly.

Kudos!

Yet another sad one a missed. I curse you for this awesome stuff.

I have to say it say that, even though I am an absolute, die hard,

SoKai fan that I could not stop reading. I mean I just got finished reading Twilit Shadows, so I'm sitting here thinking that if could tolerate the RikuXKairi in that then this would be a cakewalk

Though I have to say that I cannot believe that you made me feel for big bad Way to Dawn walkin' Riku

But yet again, as it was for twilit shadows, it is because I can relate to his position(though, this one did not make me cry)

and yet again I say this, though I believe I am slightly to young to reminisce

Enough

all of that rambling sums up to one fact:

Great story

aw. i love me some tragic riku/kairi. this was very sweet, and riku made me laugh. "what are sequins?" really? good job. :) i'm looking forward to the sequel!

I like the way you show Riku's personality. It has potential to be a great story but i have a feeling this is gonna...turn out disappointing. Also the maid of honour think was horrible. Other than that, good story so far.

Wow. That was just gorgeous. I wasn't a Riku/Kairi fan before, but I am now.

I think you did a beautiful job of elaborating on everyone's feelings, and you really did keep them in character.

I was rooting for Riku the whole time, but I was still hoping for Kairi to marry Sora so you could write a sequel.

I'll be waiting for it!