ehh. while it turned a one dimensional comic into a rounded story, i didn't like it. too gory, too poor-me, too melodramatic. but thats the subject material, not the writing. also, why exactly did ekimus feel the need to get alex buck naked? nude in a church, then fleeing for his life in an alterboys robe....foresight into the future? heheh

That was great, and I wish you would write more. I just discovered about Crimson... yesterday and have been trying to find information on him. The story helped!

-Casity

Dammit boy! I thought Pan was the end-all be-all, but sheeze. Thats a damned good read you've got there my friend. You know it takes a lot to impress me but impressed I am. Keep this up and I'm gunna want a cut of future revenues. Now put down that samich and get back to work! :-)

cool cool cool crimson is one of my fav comics ^_~ nice job

Wow! I really liked that! Good idea, re-doing the first issue of Crimson. I WAS kind of wondering how they could do all that gore and violence, yet not have the characters talk like normal people. Great job, I like your changes! Write more!!