Nice story, even if I did see the ending coming. You SHOULD be proud of yourself!

hey! please make a sequel or something! like the others said, Sakura should have magical powers and find out about it or something. i can't stand such a sad ending.

truth be told, it was a tear-jerker. ='(

i luv the story... and i think you should carry on with it... you no... how sakura finds out about his health... and may be with her magical powers she might cure him?

That was so sad...
but beautifully written..!

Bloody, i had butterfly in my stomach every time i read tragedies story for Sakura & Syaoran. I cried hard for this, man if only there were a sequel...

This is the first story that was gonna make me cry, but I still like this story.Good job!

:O why!! this is so sad :( i thought sakura was going to find out! poor syaoran :( i almost cry

Oh that's so sad. I'm glad you picked an illness and not a typical "I'm unable to have children"-line.

wow.
i feel for both of them.
:'(
so sad...

sad but nice one but...they belongs 2gether

ahh-sum! u almost made mi cry, but not yet. if u finish this(if this story iz not already finished), it would probaly bring tears 2 my Is'

That was sad...
The beginning grab my attention; where syaoran was telling
Sakura that he "i don't feel the same anywhere. i
don't feel that spark when i'm with you. I've changed and I
need to move on-," I know a person who said the same thing.
I totally love it!
Write more!

you made me cry

Are you sure you don't want to continue this story?? This is just too sad. I refuse to believe that Sakura does not know that her love may be dying... =[[

Can you be persuaded to extend this or write an alternative ending where everything is peachy and rosy?? Please? The world is sad enough as it is. A happy ending will definitely do the trick.

Well, even if you can't be persuaded to make it a happy ending, just to let you know, I really enjoyed this. It was very well-written and so full of emotion. =]] Thank you.

this is totally depressing. Is there any way you could write an alternative ending? Where she accidently finds his test results - after all she is magically and her cards wouldn't let her be unhappy - they would probably show her the reason behind Syaoran's actions.