ok ok ok so i really really really REALLY love this story! You should have continued it!

never thought victorian edward could be so haut

All I can say is WOW! I have now read everything you have published on fanfic and I just absolutely love the way you write. It is so captivating. Please continue this story or at least write another story. Thanks again!

love it! what a turn on!

Very sexy for Victorian times. Obsessiveward strikes again!

nice

Very well written being both poetic and sensual.

AW! That's just mean! You can't leave us all hanging like that! Lol. I absolutely loved it, it was amazing. Oh an i just want to say a big "HAHA!" to Jacob, no offense of course ;P

Are you continuing this story? I think you should...

well this little beauty i truly never knew was out here i have enough historical romance novels to fill a room my passion my edward found this for me and read it to me on new years eve he bet me i didnt know who wrote it it took me a few reads but something in the way he said he followed her scent i just laughed but I knew it was you elegant i love victorian edward still and always your biggest fan

this was amazing!

loved it

totally diggin the evil Darcyward

and the epilogue was brilliant

:)

My my my. I love this kind of Edward, and you do him so well it frightens me! I don't know how I can tear myself away from your chapters, but I think it helps that I have to leave to check for updates occaisonally :p

Absolutely fantastic story! Part of me wants you to continue it, but the rest of me loves the mystery. It's just so very Edwardly. Yum. Bravo, miss, Bravo!

Oh...SO GOOD!

I hope you continue this! It has so much potential for angsty goodness.

I loved it! The way it ended, you could really make a story out of it... Your story "Breaking Trinity" was rec'd by Brits23, so I came over here and found this one-shot to read, also. Well, on my way to start "Trinity" now.