I don't do reviews very often and with that I must say that your writing is some of the best I have read on here and that is saying something because I read a lot of stories of all types on here. I honestly think you should write a sequel if you haven't thought about it because that is one story I would absolutely love to read.

Hey, you. I think you did a pretty good job with this story. I didn't, however, like how the entire story seemed rushed. You surely didn't dwell on a certain thing for any length of time.
I am, also, very disappointed with how this story ended. Chapter 11 didn't even fit with the rest of the story! It made no sense whatsoever to have it end the way you did therefore I'm completely perplexed. Did you always plan for Jake to die? Was this your plan all along?
Please take this all in stride. I don't intend to be mean, honey. Happy holidays!

Hi there. I read your entire fic tonight, and I enjoyed it. However, I am not sure the tone of Chapter 11 fit in within the overall story. It really felt like it came out of left field, and I'm left reeling right now, wondering what happened and how we got here. Was this your original ending planned all along?

This was very well written. I am wiping away tears and trying not to sob! The whole story was wonderful. Sorry I didn't review until now, I just wanted to get to the end. Please write more. Maybe a sequel on how it goes with Bella and Edward. Again, awesome job!

wow!! i didnt see that one coming. im not going to ask about jake, but i cant wait to see what happens. update soon.

this chapter was very good but emotional for me just wanted to know what will happen now to Bella? is it going to turn to a Edward and Bella now or be something with reincarnation...?

Wow. I read the entire story today. Each chapter got better. Good job.

I'll be honest, this made me cry. It was well written tho, and i loved the whole story!

A lovely, heartwrenching ending to what was an excellent story!
thankyou!
x

great story and the last chapter made me cry like a baby

Awesome story, I loved it. The last chapter made me cry. Keep up the great work.

Dani

Wow.. I read this story from start to finish today... and I really just have no words for the ending. It was good until Chapter 11. I can't help but be so disappointed right now. Great writing, though. You have a lot of talent. I, however, did not like the way you chose to end it. She should have ended up alone with her sons if you had to kill Jacob, not with Edward. You should have filed this under Edward & Bella.

I just read this from start to finish, i really enjoyed it, well that is until the Volturi showed up and Jacob died =c. But all in all, a wonderful story

Wow. You really know how to break a heart don't you. OMG that was...well wow. I can't believe it. I can't believe you ended it that way! I really thought it would end well. But not all stories have a happy ending. I'm glad they got their time together and now Bella and Edward get their chance...

I'm so sad. I'm crying and I hate it. I hate that it ended this way... but I suppose it had to be. Without even realizing that this was the end of the story, I started from the first chapter today to reread, to remind myself what I was getting into - how invested I'd become in their relationship. I wish it wasn't over and I wish it could have ended happily, but I'm pleased with the story nonetheless. Thanks for your hard work.