Aw crap I forgot the ending was sad! I read this awhile back & loved it. Then got to the end. Least I know what happens and can pass it up.

Holy crap. Tears and tissues. Was not expecting that!

Eww! Leah and Mike! Seriously, you were laughing at that idea, weren't you?

Wow. A terrific angsty start.

WOW! I just read this entire story. It was so beautifully written and true to the characters. I hate to say that this would probably be what happened if Jake and Bella ended up together, but it seems to realistic.

I read a few reviews that said the end was choppy and rushed, but I couldn't disagree more. Sure, the Pack would have probably gotten there faster (and could've taken them if Jake hadn't died) but I think they were shocked over his death, and that severely messed with the response time. Bella had a tragic end, but a happy one too, as we spent her life with Jake and eternity with Deadward.

All in all, a beautiful story. I agree with another reviewer who said they wanted to see how the boys grew up, if they became wolves, etc. Breathtaking, though, wow.

Wow. I was really loving this story and looking forward to seeing how it ended. You had a new twist on the story I had not read yet, and I was very excited by that. I was really shooting for the happy ending where they lived each day with each other like it could be thier last, but the last day never came, and they got to spend a lifetime raising thier children and seeing grandchildren and so forth. I thought you might possible have Edward come and Bella realize that she was over him, because it bothered me that she could be so happy with Jake and still believe that she would run back to Edward at the drop of a hat. BUT I NEVER imagined it happening like this. Those poor babies! I realize I would die to keep harm from my children, but I like to read stories with happy endings. You know where they live happily ever after? Thank you for writing, though! You really are very talented.

I didn't think there could be a worse ending to SM's books but there it is. How terrible for their kids ?

You have grate writing skills the first half of this story was absolutely wonderful and but second half was off track and the ending ... *sigh* Not only it was bad that the way you make Jacob died but it was rushed and ridiculous that the pack was so useless against the Volturi, they were made to kill vampires and what's with the ghost ...

Ha, this made me cry. Even without HEA, this is a wonderful fic, I really enjoyed it.

This chapter is awesome, I love the peanut gallery of wolves.

It was really a pleasure to be able to read such a well thought out story. This last chapter really made my cry, and I'm still conflicted because I am really happy for the time they got together, but sad that they couldn't have more. Any chance we could see what happens with the boys in the future?

Wow. I'm glad you were brave enough to stick with your vision of how this story should go. I'm sure you caught holy hell for it. Thanks again for all of your hard work.

Uh oh. You were pretty mean to leave that one hanging, weren't you?

I love the way you have progressed through the years of their relationship. It is such a relief that she realized she was wasting so much of their lives by waiting around for something that may or may not happen. I don't know, perhaps you want to continue the feeling of ambiguity and tension surrounding their relationship, or balance the uncertainty of Jake imprinting, but I find myself really disappointed that Bella thinks she would just dump Jacob and run back to Edward should Edward decide to show up in her life.

Wow! Mike Newton and Leah? That is some mix! Great to see Leah happy for once. Personally, I think she'd beat the crap out of him. :D Thanks so much for all of your hard work with this story.

Awww, poor Jake. He really gets the crap end of the stick, doesn't he? He needs to get his degree online.

I love his plan with the bookstore. It's perfect. Where is Jake's shop, by the way? Is it in town or what?