Aw! Loved it. Really great Ron/Hermione!

Aww I like Ron/Hermione! Good work!

fantastic good job mate

Aw loved it!

Loved it! :) Good for Hermione for taking some initiative.

oh damn it. It's this curse that I have to review on everything I read... what have I gotten myself into. It's too late and I am so tired...

Just ignore what I wrote before:-)
I like your plotline. I guess that's what would have happened if their youth had been normal.

Brilliantly written as well! Enough dialogue, but no senseless talking. Well done!

I would love to read more from you!
XOXO

Aww, gave me the fuzzies!
haha(:

Hello, from the Reviews Lounge.

Hm. Cute piece of fluff, but we all know it never happened that way. That's all right for fanfiction, though; we take so many liberties. And you didn't do a bad job of characterization, not at all.

In any case, your writing is good--it could be better if you caught the 'your' that should be 'you're', a mistake you had numerous times. Something else that bothered me was the usage of ' as opposed to " for dialogue. It's a little disconcerting for me as a reader, but hey, if that's your style, I say no more.

Overall, not bad at all.

Your obedient servant, A.A.

Aw, that is so sweet. I think you've really nailed Hermione completely. Great job!

Cute story. Their arguments are very canon. And I love Harry and the twins; they're portrayed perfectly. Nicely written; I like this.

Aw So cute. I loved it.