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MoonGoddessMagic
2009-12-16 . chapter 10
“Chiba-chan get your hands off of Usagi’s butt,” LOL I love that line! Can't wait to read more.
icecreamy
2009-12-15 . chapter 10
keke cute :D
Beloved Dawn
2009-12-14 . chapter 10
haha. Whiney Rei... Loved it. Though I wasn't sure where it was going for a bit. The statuary confused me... But then, I'm not exactly hard to confuse at times. Keep 'em coming!
Sesshy's Mistress
2009-12-13 . chapter 10
loved it :D had me going "awe"! I only saw two lil things that need fixing :) 1. Accept. Did you mean except? You had acception which I believe you meant exception. Accept means to take graciously, like, I accepted the gift. Except is an exclusion. I want everything except guacamole on my taco. The other was 'ledged'. Was that supposed to be legend? I figured you were like me and type really fast. At times, my fingers type too fast and I accidentally miss a letter or two, hehe. Just wanted to point those out :)

Great job again :D!

I should be working on my stories but with a pregnant pup, school, exams, work, and decorating...it's hard lolxD.

See you next time!
CharmedSerenity3
2009-12-13 . chapter 10
This was cute! I love how mamoru always jumps to conclusions lol! update soon!
serenity wayne
2009-12-13 . chapter 10
fantastic
hatami
2009-11-29 . chapter 9
good for you... update when you feel like it


hahaha

ja ne
hatami
2009-11-29 . chapter 4
jajajjajajajajajajajaja she told I love you to the ice cream jajajajajajjajajajajjaja i didnt get it at first
hatami
2009-11-29 . chapter 1
OMG he shoud have let Usagi beat that guy...

jane
jessicam242
2009-11-29 . chapter 9
Oh this was really cute!! I'm really excited about TB!:)
sm fan
2009-11-29 . chapter 9
Great drabble. The last line took me by surprise. Keep up the good work.
satine86
2009-11-28 . chapter 1
Um.. I love jealous Mamo-Chan. It's hawt.
CharmedSerenity3
2009-11-28 . chapter 9
hehe this was a cute one, update soon!
Saiyagurl87
2009-11-02 . chapter 8
aw why you do that to poor Rei! still loved it though, a lil the bit of angst in it ^^ write some more n get to working on tb chicky
Saiyagurl87
2009-11-02 . chapter 7
hehe too cute! Darien jealous over a sandwich!
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