Chapter two was really hurtful. It's not right for Felicia to make fun of Nathan's foster parents. You did a good job for writing this chapter.

Aww my poor Hayden! Damned Brayden! He's just like Jayden! That's too Many aydens

"Perhaps you might get some inspiration for that, portfolio of yours?" Okay... somebody really needs to stop with all the Hayranda. I mean they aren't even together yet. I mean I can just imagine what will happen when they DO get together.

Okay, I'm beginning to think Hayden is your Puching Bag slash Favoraite character. You do build a lot of sympathy and it's kind of something I love about this story.

Oh, so there was no BOOM! But there was more Brayden's heart is broken and Abigail says no and POOF! We never see her again... EVER!

Another thing is what is it with the Hayrands, I can't believe Hayden and Miranda are cheating on Damien! (I know it's going to happen so don't try to throw me off.)

P.S. If oneday you're looking through the reviews blonddiva, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

Wow, now this is eventful. Aren't we getting away with the Hayranda and Darleigh too early here. Actually it's more the Hayranda since the Darleigh is kind of on the unconceivable rocks now. I just hope that everything works out and horrible things happen to Karleigh!

Great chapter and I can't wait for more!

P.S. If Hayranda does happen, wont it just be an emotional crutch for each other? I mean they make the best Bff's but it seems like they don't really have chemistry to me. But they have an immense crutchish things going on. Like Mir is Hay's way for replacing Damien and Hay is Mir's gettaway from her family, can I have an opinion?

Lillie is pregnant I know it! I think idk.
That damned Paige *slaps her*
*sighs* Hayden *sighs* Adam lambert

Hmm... It sounds like Lillie may be trying to get a pregnancy test. Is she perhaps pregnant? I wonder how that's going to all work out. I can understand her being a bit nervous to tell Damien that, but she shouldn't fear telling him. Damien is such a nice, sweet guy and he'll listen to people - especially his sister. I mean in a way, they are the only people they can confide in. I think maybe Damien wouldn't be upset that Lillie's pregnant but that this Mark character perhaps got her pregnant. It sounds like he isn't a very good guy...

Also I'm glad that Miranda was able to talk to Hayden! Everyone needs someone to confide in every now and again and it's nice to know that Hayden is that person for Miranda. I can understand the whole uncomfortableness, but now they both seem at ease again. I find it pretty cute that Miranda relates children to Hayden. Aw she wants to have his babies, lol. They both seem to have feelings for each other. We know that Miranda does but is Hayden's feelings for her developing more and more? Or perhaps those feelings for Miranda were always there he just told them to go away when he was with Damien. Hmm... very interesting.

I'm glad that Hayden is catching onto Karleigh. She's a woman who will get do anything to get what she wants. It's one thing to be ambitious and confident, it's another to try and do anything even if it means hurting another person and severing a good relationship. I wonder what Hayden will do? Maybe Lillie and Hayden can get Miranda to teach Karleigh a lesson? Lol. I'm sure I would love that, hahahaha.

I'm just curious to know if Damien will catch on. Honestly, I think at first - for awhile he'll think nothing of it. I just hope he discover's her little plot before it's too late. Anyways, excellent chapter as always and I can't wait to read more!

Oh my, my, my - this is quite the dramatic chapter it is! Wow. So first off I want to say it seems as if Damien is going to be such an excellent teacher! He seems so good at it and I really hope it's something he wants to do. I mean he seems unsure now but I don't know... I think maybe once he starts getting into the field it will work out great for him. Well - I don't know how he'll do as a student teacher... You know the teachers who come into another teacher's classroom and sort of make it as their own. At my school, they're basically treated like the other students - horribly. But I don't know, I have a feeling Damien will have a handle on it. He may seem all nice, sweet and innocent but I think he'll have a firm grip when it comes to teaching. I think that's why he's good at it. He's nice and caring but he also wouldn't be a pushover when it comes to a classroom. And in a way, teaching can be exciting - perhaps.

So Karleigh's little plan to try and steal Damien is a bit dirty... I mean I'm all for going what you want, but not stealing what's not yours... I really dislike her at the momment. She's being a you know what, lol. I'm still dying to know if/when she finds out Hayden is a HE not a SHE. I am DYING to see her reaction if that happens. Lol.

I loved how Lillie stood up not just for Damien but Hayden as well. I agree with her, both are extremely happy and I would hate for someone like Karleigh to sever their relationship - but we know something's going to happen eventually lol. Now I wonder what Damien will say... Will he believe Karleigh? Someone he's only known for awhile or his blood sister? I don't know... In a way I see Damien being too naive to believe that Karleigh would try and do something such as break him and Hayden up. After all, he always thinks everything is HIS fault for something that goes wrong. However... I also have a feeling that he might figure it out. But I have a feeling it might be later than sooner.

Anyways, I loved this chapter and I honestly can't wait for the next!

Wait wha? Karleigh si eVIL! Go Lillie! (Ps, didn't you spell that differently a while back?) Well, great chapter and i can't wait for more as long as something extremely horrid happens to Karleigh... and Hayden moves to find areal boyfriend... I dunno?

Hmm... Wow well it seems even after going through the tragic struggle of having a stillborn baby Brayden and Abigail are still going strong. It seems like the strongest hurricane couldn't even break up this couple. It's not a bad thing, it's pretty good and it's nice to know they have one another to go through this tough time with grieving over their late child. However, I'm still curious as to all of this... I mean how does all of this correlate to the "future" for Brayden and them.. And honestly, for a moment when Abigail challenged Brayden to try to "read" what was on her mind I thought it would be totally opposite... But nope. Hey, I'm evaluating all the possibilities that could go on. Haha.

As for Karleigh, she seems really, really cocky about wanting to be with Damien and knowing she'll get him. I too think it's funny how she keeps thinking Hayden is a female. Lol. It makes me wonder if she's ever going to find out if Hayden is a male...or if she even meets him. It would be interesting would it not? Even then I wonder how confident she would be in trying to win Damien over. I mean, in the end somehow she ends up with him.

Now Miranda's situation sucks big donkey butt. Paige is the biggest ** I've ever met, just had to get that out. I mean why does she feel the need to bug Miranda and just be so nasty? For some reason, I'm not surprised that Darryn is siding with Paige... I'm slightly but not really surprised at Sam siding with Mira. Hm... Very interesting indeed. But could it be something's bothering Miranda? Maybe, perphaps she's a little lovesick? Thinking of a certain timid blond male we know? Interesting...

Well this was an excellent chapter and I definitely can't wait for the next!

Ash, I know where you're going with this... make us thing Bray and Abbie are okay the BOOM! CHAPTER 106! ABIGAIL DIES IN A TRAGIC ACCIDDENT LEAVING BRAYDEN SADDENED AND ALONE! Okay, yeah... sorry.

Karleigh? Okay... I wouldn't be freaked out if Karleigh was baking cookies but TRYIING TO RUIN MY HAYMIEN! I MUST START BASHING THIS LITTLE... oh, sorry, continuity and all, I guess it's okay.

Hmm, Paige is really being mean to Mir, I wonder why... well duh, she's BAD! AND BAD TO THE BONNE!

Well, great chapter and I can't wit for more.

Oh no! Stillbirth! (Weird thing is I looked that up yesterday for my biology homework) I don't know what's going to happen now.

P.S. Do you have to end Haymien AND Braybigail?

Oh...wow poor Brayden and Abigail. That is some tough stuff right there. I never even considered that the baby would be born stillborn. Honestly, I've been thinking about a lot of stuff in this story about this couple and the whole baby thing and how it would correlate to Brayden and his present self. Honestly... I considered Abigail and the baby dying during childbirth... That was a sad thought but it seemed the most likely at the time.

Then, as I was reading this chapter I thought of another thought after watching a Dr. Phil episode. I especially got suspicious when Brayden was kicked out of the delivery room. Well, honestly he wasn't really kicked more so asked to leave. And... I don't know if I blame Abigail much. I mean I don't really think I would want anyone other than the doctor to be present... I mean if it was me, trust me I would be a mean, physco biatch in there going through labor and crap so it's best you leave, lol.

But on a serious note I kept thinking back to this Dr. Phil episode I saw recently and I kept thinking that maybe Abigail had an alternative plan for the baby in which she was going to give the baby up for adoption and Brayden wouldn't know about it until after... Dun, dun, dun. Yeah, that happened in an episode to a real couple. Then again, it doesn't make much sense.

So yeah, still a tough and sad chapter. I wonder what's going to happen next. I wonder if Abigail and Brayden are going to be able to make it through this very stressful and very tough time. I'm curious... Anyways, as always this was a wonderful chapter and I can't wait to read more soon!

Oh right? Just kill the Haymien and break my little wilting heart...

Well, for a filler this was a great way ti highlight Damien and Hayden's failed relationship! Great chapter and I cant wait for more.

Wow, three chapters I'm kind of overwhelmed ahaha! My next update will be coming fairly soon I hope, it's halfway done sort of. Lol. So I think it was interesting to...sort of get into the mind of Charles and just know a little bit more about him. I think Tarrah seems like a nice lady and of course she didn't mind talking to Charles. But I agree, Charles is very much like Hayden... It seems they both seem to blame THEMSELVES for when things go wrong and it's really not their fault. I hardly doubt that it's his fault for Shaylah being so crude and their relationship going downhill. I agree, she's probably banging some dude in Spain or whatever... He's willing to make whatever effort he can.

Charles is not a horrible father. Yes, he didn't get to see a lot of his children's childhood which might hurt as a parent when your children are finally grown up but Hayden and Brayden turned into excellent kids and it had to come from somewhere, lol.

I loved the whole little dream of Charles dreaming of Christian, very interesting. I don't know why he feels so weird about it though, my friend has a huge teacher fetish lol. Christian probably doesn't even remember something like that, especially if it seems so long ago. Maybe Charles should call or something? Hm, I don't know.

But I'm glad that Abigial & Brayden and Hayden & Damien told their news. I'm glad to know how excited Charles is for both of them. So they don't want to really have a wedding? That's fine really, no need to be all fancy and go all out if you don't want to be. Besides, if they wanted to they could always renew their vows in the future. And yeah, the whole gay marriage thing being illegal they could go and get I think what's called a civil union or whatever that's sort of like being married but doesn't actually have the word married because people want to keep the santicity of marriage or whatever because getting married is like, a religious joining or whatever crap. Nothing really bad about a civil union but I heard it's more...hard. Especially when it comes to adopting or fostering kids. But gosh, it seems like Hayden and Damien are having a case of baby fever. I know they're a strong couple and I believe they love each other more than anything. But I don't know... maybe they love each other so much that things will eventually break off so they can both make sure one another gets what they could never really give each other... But I'm still not quite so sure... But anyways, a remarkable chapter and I can't wait for the next!

I love this story!.
Ur tongue! LUCKY!
My Xmas vaca starts in four days, but I have threemore days of mid terms *horror music*
just took two today...hm
anyways u updates r helping me unwind before I study somemore