sweet story...

Hey. its me wiggle. this was a weird story though i didnt think it was funny. srry. i need to know how to put stories up on this site so can you come over sunday and help? its an okay story just dont try to do it again. keep on wrting. bye

The problem with this story:not much detail. Use more, and make your chapters longer than a paragraph, please, or combine all the chapters into one chapter.

The plot is sorta is and not an original idea, since a lot of people are doing gameshow fics nowadays, but nobody's done one on this show yet.

This was by far the funniest story I have ever read in my life. It could have used a little more detail in the 3rd & 4th round.

ok this story has one good thing and one bad thing about it:

Good thing: the idea is orignal. i love the t.v show alot. it is super funny! I can't believe no one thought of this before.

Bad thing; the story has two little detail in it. it also seems like you are trying to squeese everything into one small chapter. anothor thing.. the chapters are way to small, becuase of thered being not enough details and the squeesing of everything.

This story is a really good idea and could be good, you just have to work on the things i meations. then this story will become more sucessful. i am not doing this to be mean, i am trying to give you an honest review. i hope this helps you with your future stories and gives up great sucess!

didnt belive no one else thought of it great story make another

lol! nice idea dude.