Good story.

Would have been interested to see if you went any further with it but it says complete... if you want to change it i'll be happy...#hint#hint#

i could see yani and our susie together.

i noticed in the epp that he really didn't have any scenes with her.

but i could see them together, She'd be all snark and he'd be like patience with her and put up with her to a point.

susie to Gwen Have you slept with ianto yet? No really too bad he is a much better shag then Owen.

oh i see you've slept with owen yet? oh replace me in every way.

oh i really liked this by the way.

Very interesting pairing. I wish there were more stories like this one.

An interesting idea, well dramatized.

oh wow that was like soo unique! and bloody amazing! i love how you showed both thier potentials and their freindship. and how htey took comfort in eah other, becasue they both had no one else. really just amazing.

Wow. Never have really given much thought to a Ianto/Suzie dynamic...but yeah. Add it to the list of woulda/couldas. Good story and solid explanation of character motives/decisions.

Darque

Very interesting idea. Good job.

Great. Don't think I've ever seen Ianto/Suzie before, and this is Torchwood- I've seen most things before. It still really rings true though, I love the idea of them each knowing the other's secrets, and being deeply enough involved that neither would give them away. And I love Ianto knowing which commandment it is. Although I think technically it's only adultery if one of the parties is married. Am about to go wading through the masses of post CofE day 4 hysteria, I was very happy to see something of yours at the point that I left off a few days ago.

Brilliant! Great view of a relationship we never really saw on the show.

Gx

I've only read a few Ianto/Suzie stories, and this is one of the best ones. Because I honestly can see the two of them getting involved like that, and engaging in a conspiracy of mutual silence. I've always regretted we didn't get more of a chance to know Suzie, though I suppose that leaves us free canon to play with when writing.

Only Ianto would consider having a fling with a co-worker while his half-cyber girlfriend was being kept alive by machines adultery. And of course he'd know what commandment it was-Ianto knows everything.

This fic is a fantastic medicine for post CoE-Day 4 depression.

Well Done ]

aw, very sweet story. I loved the last bit. great job!