This is what I'm talking about! Awesome! Awesome! Awesome! Not only that it's about Auron (my favorite) but you captured his character extremely well! Keep it up! Write more!

I love this...and no, you're not demanding. I thought the same thing. _ Auron and Rikku are my favorite characters in FFX, and I'm glad you wrote this little "look" inside Auron's head. It's not OOC, although there are a few things there that I couldn't see him saying...Auron rocks, though. XD Your first stab at fanfiction? Great job...I know it's easier to write originals, but fanfics are fun. Keep on writing.