okay i was eating hot sauce as i read this, and i could not tear my eyes away so im about to die because my mouth is on fire!

intense! but just getting the badge didnt feel right either. there wasnt a victory, or anything. cara and ben should chuck it and demand to battle again. that was not a real gym badge victory, and giovanni knows it!

Only three typos. awesome chapter as always!

~La Principessa

This was a good chapter. Of course we already knew about Team Rocket, but it was still good. Good job including Ben's batle. And update soon.

This story is, by far, THE BEST STORY EVER! I just watched the Pooka episode on !

Fantastic as always! Ur making me want to go swimming now! Only a few errors: you forgot end quotations a few times, but other than that, great!

Keep up the good work! Still loving it!

~Principessa Dell'Opera

BIKER DUDES! YEAH!

Poor things. That kinda reminds me of when we found my cat. He was six weeks old, and we found him in our lawnmower! He was starving, and fluffy, and cute, so we kept him. We got attached. That's so cute! Love Eevee.

~La Principessa

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Awesome chapter as always!

Once again, a good chapter. That critisizer who keeps reviewing is a little funny, but I think if he or she really disliked your story, they would really stop reading it. Bug i like it. :) Check out my stories sometime.

Angry Mexican mothers. gotta love em!

Well done as ever! love it!

~La Principessa

"Lara and her Ponyta wee among them." Lololololololololol!

Great chapter as always! I've always wished I could ride a horse, but an unfortunate genetic hip and knee screw up prevents me from it. The few times I have, when I got off the horse I couldn't stand. I envy everyone that can ride!

Fantastically done! Two typos I caught and that was it!

Happy Halloween!

~La Principessa

Its really well written.Its a great story and it reminds me of the tv show, kind of like your own version of the episodes. I sense some couples coming in future chapters. Though, I doubt Cara and Ben will hook up.Good job!

Aw! Thats so cute! Well done!

No grammatical or spelling errors whatsoever! Great job!

~La Principessa

This story is so good, Mary is adorable!

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! LOVED IT!

~La Principessa

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Perfect.

Uh-oh, theres gonna be some serious ** going on! lol! please update soon!

~La Principessa

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"Saffron Coty"? Wow! What's a "coty"? lol. Only one I caught! Well done!

Gahh!Update already!Update!Update!

Hey that was pretty damn cool! I liked that one. I like smashing people's faces in, which is why I'm good at Super Smash Brother's Brawl.

Well written! No spelling or gramatical errors at all!

~La Principessa