Ha! Grissom has performance problems in front of monkeys...well, who doesn't? Enjoyed your story!

That was cute and I never expected the monkey.

That was really cute and funny and actually, I didn't suspect it was the monkey so you had me fooled.

This made me smile. It's good to ead one of your stories again. I hope all is well with you. anne

Can you do more of these challenges? I love the way you can piece together a story using random lines.

Haven't heard from you in a while...loved this...it's great to see Grissom flustered...loved the banana comparison...more please...

OK, I have to confess...I had NO idea it was the monkey!!


PS. I really do read the disclaimers and author's notes...it's always fun to read the different things that people write!!

glad to have you back! and that is one very good story. didn't see the monkey coming lol very clever. hope you'll have more stories for us :)

Very clever. Even though I read the time statement, it took me a while to orient myself. Loved this line: “Gil, he’s a damn monkey! Who is he going to tell? The Rainforest Enquirer?”
That made me laugh. Nice to see our happy couple's issues haven't magically vanished after reuniting.

Joan

Awesome Story. Thanks for sharing.

VERY cute. I loved it. I hope you will write others for CSI

Oh, you're a sneaky one.

I loved it! You revealed the monkey perfectly.

Bwahahah! That was a hell of a tease, but WORTH it! What a nice way to start a friday--fic like this is a great treat!


(and yes, I DID read the disclaimer. Do I get a prize?)

Cinco

No, actually didn't think it was the monkey, LOL! The Rainforest Enquirer? What a hoot! This was simply delightful. And yeah, ya' kinda really do need the disclaimer, LOL! It keeps the copyright police happy, snicker...

ha ha! Great story :_)