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AmaryMei
2009-09-26 . chapter 5
"And if she is immortal by means of Pandora, all I can think of (in my deranged mind) is that the passing of immorality has become one hell of a STD."

This comment was what I had in mind. LOLOLOL
hattergems
2009-09-19 . chapter 23
"I’m presuming you have some form of currency on you that is not in priceless gemstones.”

The ending is just pure love. The entire fic is LOVE. It is not so deeply in the realms of impossibility at all and you didn't twist the characters' personalities to suit your plot. This entire collection is incredible, but maybe just some more atmospheric description? Otherwise, perfection! My favourite chapter so far!
hattergems
2009-09-19 . chapter 22
Oh, don't grumble! It's perfectly beautiful! It flows so well too, good job on expanding on the theme in such a logical direction and not dwindling off or losing you thread of thought! I love being able to follow along so smoothly ...
66ButterflyOfDarkness99
2009-08-25 . chapter 23
Talking about whipped men...lololololol xD

Now, this really came as a shock...first time I read about Aoko acting like that while the whole discovery scene is happening. She usually runs aways crying or starts shouting and/or crying, or she remains silent while they are taking him away, or he escapes in a puff of smoke...

Who knew there was yet another posibility! 8D

Awesome chapter! ^^

*pops in cookies*

P.S: I prefer being served by a gentleman thief...And if he wants to join me I won't complain...*grins slowly*
s2lou
2009-08-25 . chapter 23
*swoons* that I admit I would NEVER have imagined happening. *laughs* you're wonderful. You alone could have thought of that and phrased it the way you did AND made it awesome. *ish happy*

Also. Em. I read the other chapters, and didn't have yet the time to review 'em. But I will! I will! I loved them too much not to, truth be told... *is lame*
magicbulletgirl
2009-08-25 . chapter 23
I think I actually started squeeing aloud *which is highly embarrassing*
Great writing and characterizations. Everything was perfect based on what we know. Poor Hakuba thou.
Thanks for writing~
Ningen Demonai
2009-08-24 . chapter 23
Adsflkjh AHAHAHAHAHAHAH! Oh my goodness, this is pure hilarity! Oh stubborn, brilliant Aoko~ Managed to shock EVERYONE in this scenario, which is just priceless. I love it!
YumeTakato
2009-08-24 . chapter 23
X3 That was awesome. I'm amused.
66ButterflyOfDarkness99
2009-08-23 . chapter 22
I think I said this before somewhere but I'll say it again...
Reality sucks...I hate reality...And because it sucks so much we have to face it everyday because that's life...

And we have to bear with it...that's why people love dreams so much...

Gah, I'm babbling now...^^u

Lovely chapter as usual!!

*pops in lots of cookies for not remembering to send before* xD
66ButterflyOfDarkness99
2009-08-23 . chapter 21
I totally completely absolutely loved this chapter! <3
After the last chapter I feel like I can breath now...and we are back with the smexy scenes! Wohoo!! xDD And again we get to see a jealous-overprotective Kaito! yay!! x33

And that omake...lolololololololol! Hakuba...he needs to be there to make the scenes more funnier... more over if a naked Kaito and a naked Aoko laying on a bed are vinculated some how with the scene...*snickers*

Fangirl thought: M...naked Kaito...*blushes*
66ButterflyOfDarkness99
2009-08-23 . chapter 20
Ok...this is just plain sad...

Even more to me 'cause...well...a few years ago I left a guy I really liked because I was really stupid back then and now he has another girlfriend and I just want to bang my head against a wall everytime I see them...(and I do see them a lot 'cause we kinda have the same group of friends...)

So yeah...it sucks...
66ButterflyOfDarkness99
2009-08-23 . chapter 19
Poor Hakuba, not even as an old retired old man he can be at peace...^^u
But I'm sure they'll send him a letter or visit him. After all, what harm can he do? xD

Cute story!! <3
66ButterflyOfDarkness99
2009-08-23 . chapter 18
Yay!! Plz! You must write that mini fic! Kaito being a real magician? This plot is so good! <3
Pretty please? *puppy eyes*

P.S: What else is he hiding from her?? Next thing we know, he's telling her he's actually from another planet and came to Earth to take the gem pandora to its original planet... lololol xDD
66ButterflyOfDarkness99
2009-08-23 . chapter 17
Dreams are weird...if not take a look at mines... *sweat drops*
I swear, sometimes they are so weird that I lay in bed for a whole twenty minutes trying to figure them out... @_@

But hey, I never said I didn't love them the way they are...*grins*
66ButterflyOfDarkness99
2009-08-23 . chapter 16
Aw...he can be so cute and sweet sometimes... <3

But we too love him when he's being his usual self...who wouldn't?!! xDD
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