Such a sweet chapter
i really loved thiss
soo sweet!
well done!
update soon x

YAY! There's more up!
SO well written. So excellent. You don't need me to tell you how wonderfully you write.
More soon? :D

That is so sweet! I love it! I know everyone may say htis but...PLEASE WRITE MORE!
can you give my story a read?

It is called 'The Doctor and Rose behind the storylines'

and my name is 'newmoonjacob17'

thanks x
LOVED IT!

x

Aww soo sweet
update soon x

Great start. I love the detail you've put in your writing. I look forward to what comes next.

Aw! Brilliantly written, and I'm afraid that you've got me wanting more.
SO WRITE MORE, DAMMIT.

I was drawn in by the quote and the story was so simple and so beautifully written, very good portrayal...that the Doctor was so afraid that she would leave