It would be Out of Charactor IF you didnt underline the
circumstanses (metephorically of course)the way you did.

I think it fits well, I am glad Kate and Ziva made up.
Now we just need Paula to fix everything...kinda.

wow that was amazing tosee Ziva so vulnable was so powerful and Kate wow

Hey, more please? This is curious.

I like it! Its so weird and funny! I cant wait to read more :)

great idea! I'd like to do it, if possible
btw, love your story ;)

wow...this was intense!! loved it..makes sense that kate and ziva are at each other throats...can't wait to see what comes nexT!1

White pizza! lol, that was GREAT! Poor Gibbs has a little home in the afterlife for all his team members.

Wow...Intense story...
Kate kinda did have it coming from David...
I like people are trying to hold her back and she just gets past everyone...
I like this...Are you going to keep going with it or...?

Spike

who be the other person? Tony?
wait, Tim is dead?! who next? Abby?! Ducky?! Vance?! Gibbs?! PALMER?! [um, who else can I name?] oh! Mann. [is her 1st name Pam?]

Might um, Kelly and...grr! who is Kelly's mom? The first wife [well watev] appear?
Oh! Might Shannon and Kelly appear? That wud B cool.
Not trying to influince or make you feel obligated to or anything.

anyway...please answer atleast the McGee question, I think I need to go back over that part.
I couldnt quite tell what it ment.

i like this story but im just like WOAH WOAH why is kate so bitchy! I mean she was before, just not cold! Lol i love kate! And jenny they were my fav o.o...
Anyways lol update soon :]

YES!! Whoo! I don't like Kate...never did

WOw you can so feel both Ziva's and Kate's emotional PAin. KAte was defintly never forgoten and you can see that. and I believe if Ziva died it woul be the same.

I understood it fine. Oww...I feel sorry for poor Kate

interesting..wasn't sure if ziva was really dead or not when you whisked her away but then realized she was pulled by dinozzo's thoughts...can't wait to see what comes next!!

Oh Hell no. This is pure hell for Ziva. By the way what about Chris Pacci? Doesnt he count and Decker? and damn...Im trying to find other Dead People from NCIS but it didnt work.