 meiousei 2009-10-28 . chapter 1This was lovely! |
 T'Soy 2009-10-12 . chapter 1 Loved the story. You are very clever with the dialog! My only small problem was the speed at which they fall. Still a great read, I love your work.
Please keep writting!! Thanks! |
 mykardia 2009-09-02 . chapter 1oh this is so sweet! i love the story...and the way you explain everything...details are great =)
really cool story...i admire your story telling abilities. Spock is really amusing and super cute <3
ah...great ending! ^^ |
 Redflowercactus 2009-08-27 . chapter 1Of all the Spock/Uhura fics I've read, I think your characterization of Spock takes the cake. Please, keep writing! |
 spocklover2013 2009-08-12 . chapter 1really good! and I love how the author uses a point of the movie that was mentioned only in passing and turned it into a whole story! |
 ModernScribe 2009-08-02 . chapter 1I loved this story. It was so graceful. I'm also glad that when they got to together, they weren't teacher and student. That always irritated me. Your writing too was spectacular. The timing was perfect. It didn't feel like you were rushing the romance because you had enough build up to suggest an attachment before you solidified it with the kiss. And Spock as the "man of mystery" was just funny. Oh yeah, that's another thing. The way that you balanced the two sides of Spock was well done too. Really, it was a great story. |
 ayachan1412 2009-07-21 . chapter 1what a wonderful story, i love how Spock relax and let his inner human self to shine, I doubt anyone other than his mom ever seen this side. very lovely, you really should continue or write more :)
ooh btw...thank you for putting them on my campus ...are you from UH too by any chance? ooh and an active Diamond head? priceless hahahaha |
 Ladyhawke 2009-07-19 . chapter 1 i THINK THAT THIS STORY IS GREAT! |
 blue-crystal-9 2009-07-18 . chapter 1Loved this. It was very entertaining and well written, and very unique. Really great job! :) |
 Pipergirl 2009-07-15 . chapter 1 Gah! I LOVED this fic! I'm speechless, actually. Your Spock was so easy to adore--I couldn't get enough of his wry amusement, even down to his teasing.
I bet he can make the earth move... *sighs blissfully* |
 Bandbabe 2009-07-14 . chapter 1Awesome story! I loved it! |
 Rem-Cycle rawr. 2009-07-14 . chapter 1LOVE IT! omg!, have you considered adding on to this?
it would be very logical...lol, that was a bad joke. but anyways keep it up! |
 zestyenterprize 2009-07-14 . chapter 1Oh! Hot, hot, hot! I love it. Spock is definitely a little OOC here, but in a really good way. I really enjoyed that you acknowledge he's a physicist rather than a linguist, too. Great story! Going in my favorites. |
 ToughSpirit 2009-07-13 . chapter 1I really love this fic, it was well written, great plot, great beggining, just great. Loved it! Great job! |
 sf.fangirl 2009-07-12 . chapter 1OMG! Super-awesome. I don't normally gush, but wow! It is impossible for me to give you any con-crit because there's no criticism. All I do on compliment on your lovely story which actually does not fall into many of the fanon traps other do.
- Spock is not univerasally known to be half-human (it's certainly not something he'd share with many people)
- Spock's not a linguist.
- Amanda is something of one and a genius so she and Uhura could probably happily talk shop.
- It makes sense of Uhura's maturity at Starfleet Academy and makes Spock slightly less of a cradle robber
- You keep him an officer depite being in an academic environment (amazing the number of authors who seem to think he's either an officer or a professor but coannot be both)
I love the glimpse of Amanda your story provides. I love how leery Spock is of revealing who he is. And how he relaxes when he realizes he's not in any way being insulted. I love how Uhura keeps pointing out the obvious (to her) advantages of his mixed-species that he's never possibly considered before.
I really love this story. I think Spock might be a tad OOC a little too joking and flirty with someone he doesn't know. But I'll completely overlook it to give your story total love. Thanks for it. I look forward to more of your stories. |