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meiousei
2009-10-28 . chapter 1
This was lovely!
T'Soy
2009-10-12 . chapter 1
Loved the story. You are very clever with the dialog! My only small problem was the speed at which they fall. Still a great read, I love your work.
Please keep writting!! Thanks!
mykardia
2009-09-02 . chapter 1
oh this is so sweet! i love the story...and the way you explain everything...details are great =)
really cool story...i admire your story telling abilities. Spock is really amusing and super cute <3
ah...great ending! ^^
Redflowercactus
2009-08-27 . chapter 1
Of all the Spock/Uhura fics I've read, I think your characterization of Spock takes the cake. Please, keep writing!
spocklover2013
2009-08-12 . chapter 1
really good! and I love how the author uses a point of the movie that was mentioned only in passing and turned it into a whole story!
ModernScribe
2009-08-02 . chapter 1
I loved this story. It was so graceful. I'm also glad that when they got to together, they weren't teacher and student. That always irritated me. Your writing too was spectacular. The timing was perfect. It didn't feel like you were rushing the romance because you had enough build up to suggest an attachment before you solidified it with the kiss. And Spock as the "man of mystery" was just funny. Oh yeah, that's another thing. The way that you balanced the two sides of Spock was well done too. Really, it was a great story.
ayachan1412
2009-07-21 . chapter 1
what a wonderful story, i love how Spock relax and let his inner human self to shine, I doubt anyone other than his mom ever seen this side. very lovely, you really should continue or write more :)
ooh btw...thank you for putting them on my campus ...are you from UH too by any chance? ooh and an active Diamond head? priceless hahahaha
Ladyhawke
2009-07-19 . chapter 1
i THINK THAT THIS STORY IS GREAT!
blue-crystal-9
2009-07-18 . chapter 1
Loved this. It was very entertaining and well written, and very unique. Really great job! :)
Pipergirl
2009-07-15 . chapter 1
Gah! I LOVED this fic! I'm speechless, actually. Your Spock was so easy to adore--I couldn't get enough of his wry amusement, even down to his teasing.

I bet he can make the earth move... *sighs blissfully*
Bandbabe
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
Awesome story! I loved it!
Rem-Cycle rawr.
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
LOVE IT! omg!, have you considered adding on to this?
it would be very logical...lol, that was a bad joke. but anyways keep it up!
zestyenterprize
2009-07-14 . chapter 1
Oh! Hot, hot, hot! I love it. Spock is definitely a little OOC here, but in a really good way. I really enjoyed that you acknowledge he's a physicist rather than a linguist, too. Great story! Going in my favorites.
ToughSpirit
2009-07-13 . chapter 1
I really love this fic, it was well written, great plot, great beggining, just great. Loved it! Great job!
sf.fangirl
2009-07-12 . chapter 1
OMG! Super-awesome. I don't normally gush, but wow! It is impossible for me to give you any con-crit because there's no criticism. All I do on compliment on your lovely story which actually does not fall into many of the fanon traps other do.

- Spock is not univerasally known to be half-human (it's certainly not something he'd share with many people)
- Spock's not a linguist.
- Amanda is something of one and a genius so she and Uhura could probably happily talk shop.
- It makes sense of Uhura's maturity at Starfleet Academy and makes Spock slightly less of a cradle robber
- You keep him an officer depite being in an academic environment (amazing the number of authors who seem to think he's either an officer or a professor but coannot be both)

I love the glimpse of Amanda your story provides. I love how leery Spock is of revealing who he is. And how he relaxes when he realizes he's not in any way being insulted. I love how Uhura keeps pointing out the obvious (to her) advantages of his mixed-species that he's never possibly considered before.

I really love this story. I think Spock might be a tad OOC a little too joking and flirty with someone he doesn't know. But I'll completely overlook it to give your story total love. Thanks for it. I look forward to more of your stories.
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