you don't know how happy i am to find some good stuff in the munto section. Thanks!

aw, it's sad. :'( poor Yumemi. great fic btw.

Pretty good.

Ari chan

Very nice story but depressing...

OMG.


OMG! LOVE THIS!
I know that must seem odd...someone loving a suicide attempt story, but One: it's a Munto x Yumemi story, Two: it was SO cute, and Three: it's Munto x Yumemi. <3

That's all the reasons anyone needs.

But seriously, this was a great story. I was wondering the same about why no one's done a depressed Yumemi story. Doesn't make sense in my mind. But the one that there is, is awesome. 5 stars :D And I love your writing style, too!!

Wow... this is so far away from what we normally see you post up here. On one hand, it's actually refreshing, seeing a new genre pop up. On the other... I feel so bad for Yumemi right now. I think the case of us not writing anything depressing for her is that we may just love her too much.

As for the total depression, I can understand that. I'm not necessarily into the whole suicide ideal in stories, but I like your stuff so much I think I can forgive that. As usual, it's enjoyable and quite good in terms of writing, even if unorthodox. Thanks so much for writing.

you're absolutely right about the suicide thing, I should write one!
but yours was absolutely wonderful to read, I was so sad when Munto wasn't there but I was entranced by Yumemi's obsession to see red again. great work, keep it up!
(but will you fix the typo in the title?)