 Barranca 2009-09-26 . chapter 2That was dirty. I cannot imagine the bills for the clothing Dante and Vergil have to replace each time they "meet up". |
 elvareth 2009-08-02 . chapter 1That was quite good! After reading first chapter I actually even thought about faving the fic. But then I decided not to. It was good but not great. And this thing about constantly stabbing, uh, that's kind of ridiculous. Sorry ^^;
You wrote "After many years of not doing this, their bodies were practically on fire in hunger." But from when it looks like they're doing it quite often. It's confusing... |
 fiona868 2009-07-13 . chapter 2Oh gods, I really enjoyed that. Dante's 'Hips don't lie' line made me laugh so hard I almost fell from the chair, lol. I had to climb back up fast to read the rest.
Oh, and I'm a sucker for DT sex! I had to mention that too.
I'm so waiting for the sequel and your another DMC fic! n_n
(Would a freakishly long sex scene bore anyone? Not me, if it's this good) |
 ladysubaru83 2009-07-10 . chapter 1oh very nice XD is there more? |
 fiona868 2009-07-10 . chapter 1That was so mean to stop there! It was a very promising beginning for a very hot sex scene >XD
Anyway, this fic is wonderful. I love the way they are at each other's throats even while having sex. And Dante...I think you got him perfectly. |