Hi, it's me!

Just a few things about the chapter you should know

Mourtogg doesn't have an o in it. It's just Murtogg. And please more description! I've read a chapter of your other story, and I love it when I can see it happening like a little movie in my head - I'm just not getting it with Henri - oh, sorry H, Henry's version! Otherwise, It's so good! More please!

xPPx

i love that ending!

i loved the story!

Mr Slappykens :D i though that was really funny. Love it so far :)

this is a smephic story in fact, i'm gonna go look for the sequel right now

that story did give me quite a few ideas for mine, thanks. i can't wait for the fourth movie to come out, so we can find out what happens to Henry and Jack next!

I understand why you're waiting to do a sequel. This whole story has followed the films, something new would put it out of character.

Do you think Henry would really want to live forever as a child? If she so badly wants to be treated as older, wouldn't she not want to be confined to the shape of a thirteen year old girl FOREVER?

This is a good story and I regret taking so long to read it. There was a nice ending that leaves it open but it could also end without a sequel if in the end you choose not to write one.

Your writing improved from start to finish and the plot seemed to get more organized. Or rather, Henry's part in the plot. There were a few grammatical errors here and there, but other than that you've got it down! I think Henry matured as the story went on as well. She became more accepting of the people around her and the events surrounding her. Well done on this!

Fleet

Imagine that. Captain Jack Sparrow as your father. Now THAT would be a good one. Not really fatherly wise, just the connection. I'm related to Captain Jack Sparrow! Braggin rights and all...

Anyway, Henry deserves something good after all of her pain. I think she found it.

Fleet

Jack's... kid? I always suspected it. Until you said she was Cutler's. Now I'm almost positive she's Jack's. On to the next one to find out!

I'm surprised Jones didn't just run her through. It must be that sentimental side of his.

This was very fast paced, which was a good thing for a battle like this. It's easier to grab and keep the reader's attention, which I feel you've done here.

I still don't feel right about Henry breaking into all those intimate and loving moments between... everyone, but especially the marriage. I'm glad she chose the right place and backed out. Now how will she take what's coming next?

Aww yay! I finally finished it! Sorry it's taken so long, but it was well worth it!

I love Jack-has-a-child stories, they are so cute! I love Henry, she fitted in really well and made me laugh rather a lot! I did think that it might be Jack, but I really, honestly wasn't sure it was him, you kept me guessing right till the end which is fantastic!

Really well done. I am so glad I read it!

Lotsa luv.

LV XX

Well she stole Elizabeth's thunder for sure... not sure how I feel about that, but hey, Henry needed some sort of heroic line in this.

Wow, blow to the mind there. I did NOT see Beckett as her father. Explains quite a few things...

That last line was so hilarious! I have a lot of catching up to here, so I'm going to keep it brief.

Jack's comforting in the last chapter must mean something... he's just so gentle with her!

Okay, I'll review again in a sec or two.

Fleet