A great story. Very well written.

it was good. han would never leave leia. ever. i would probably go into a depression if that ever happened! thnx...

Interesting. I like this piece, although the progression of events reads a little disjointedly, and some parts of the song can be a little too heavily laid on. I think you could have less song and more story, but that's just me.

Overall I enjoyed your story greatly and I hope to see more stories with Jaina and Zekk in the future.

Best,

-Don "QuixoticQuest"