Def in character, very much appreciated!

I was getting scared there a bit, almost thought it was the cure he brought... So glad it was money instead )... Max should stop hating on him now too, when she should know he's better than that.

great story

I really, really enjoyed how you added to and altered the episode. It would have been nice if it had been more like your deal on the show. (Btw- really don't mind if you do kill off Logan.) Good fic :)

I think you did a really good job with this fan fic. I could picture the characters actually saying and doing the things that you wrote. With some fan fic's they're fun to read but you know that they would never do that. I've never responded to any fan fics before because I haven't thought that a really good job was done on them but I think you deserve to know how good this was. Keep up the good work.

Good story even though it's been done a lot, but it was different in a way it wasn't a romance or anything more like a building block for something like a friendship.

Oh my God I can't believe this story has only been read 3 times! I think it is brilliant writing it's one of your best and I would love it if you would continue it, but I've noticed you've got a lot to finish writing. Again this was an awesome story!

Another wonderful story! You nailed both characters (you captured Max's perpetual bitchiness extremely well- I wanted to slap her) and you showed Alec's hidden but definitely there loyal side (the boy oozes it, whether he likes it or not). Bravo!

Good job. Nice to see Max relenting a little. The bitch routine she constantly pulls with Alec on the show gets so tiring. It'll be interesting to see your take on what happens next. Maybe you could throw a little Logan/Asha in while you're at it? It would give Max a reason to get closer to Alec. (Well...it was worth a shot to ask ;)

I like it. I dunno why. I just like it