Very nice.

neat character backgrounds, i really like ranger's because it kind of ties into the online-dm scene and everyones' handles. i can tell this was one of your EARLY works bcuz the dialogue and the personalities are a little flat and the ending kinda craps out, but the premise was interesting, one battle from five POVs. i really like your bitterman fic too, that really turned the guy into a tragic figure. makes me feel for him when i blast him to mush in the game ;) write more Q3A fics, i get the feeling u have alot of depth behind each character in store.

Very well writen, it is almost long enough to be a book. Good imagination, good therey, good placement of action. Very nice possative thinking.

Wow, that was ... kinda sick. Good story, but that Cadavre, one sick puppy. I kinda wonder where you come up with this gory stuff.