that was beautiful

Kyoko definetly deserves it!

SHE WAS AN AWESOME MOM!

KYOKO HONDA WAS THE BEST MOTHER EVER.

WE SHALL ALL MISS HER.

may the anime gods smile upon her.

I rarely - if ever, read poetry fan-fiction, but I'm glad I choose to read this piece! I especially like the ABCB rhyme scheme. This sums up Kyoko very well, and I like the idea of Kyoko watching over the zodiac as well, instead of just Tohru. :)

(Also, I feel the need to point out that I am rather impressed with your grammar. It's nice to know some people still care about their writing. :) )

Pockets

Keeps the safe and sound,

Hi, I'm requesting one change. I think you meant to type:

Keeps [them] safe and sound,

Aside from that, I love this tribute to Kyoko Honda. You've done a fantastic job of capturing all that she and, by extension, her daughter Tohru have meant to the Sohmas. And you've capture the essence of what she's meant for Tohru.

Excellent tribute.

Otaku Mom (Sheri)

I have absolutely no complaints about this.

It's very sweet and well writen, you truly have a talent with poems. Or this is simply a stroke of luck. Either way, I really like it.

Kendall