You said send me a review so I thought it would be rude if I didn't. Azera seems cool so far hope she don't win the pin contest because that would be unrealistic. I mean didn't dante become like the strongest devil possible at the end of part two? Oh well lol I don't know much anyway

Lol barfights are cool, not fuzzy though. Its cool that you showed azera could kick ** but if a dude really grabbed dante couldn't he just use devil trigger? Either way cool chapter

Good first chapter..a drunk dante is no bueno..the fuzz approves

dude...this story is awesome...aww,the chain was the cutest thing ever...and kicking vergils nuts was the most hilarious thing! i really like this story, it has humor,love,tragedy its great, i hope u'll keep the good work up!!
the kid

Aw, I want a necklace like that from Dante. Lol.

I liked the nightmare scene. Really gives a good look into her head and what would be going on in there, like the whole inner turmoil stuff.
I eageraly await the next chapter. Will Azera thank Dante for the gift? How??
Lol.

woo-hoo, the story is off to a great... first 4 chapters, since i was far too lazy to be expected to review each one, so, you know, i gotta try that sweet and sour thingy sometime... though, the sour side seems like it would be hard to convince the cops i was just tired if they pulled me over..>.>

:D keep the story goin, good luck

Nice work with this story. It's written pretty well, which is a big thing for me. You could say one of my pet peeves is when a story is written bad, whether it be grammer or punctuation, or poor use of words or just a bad story idea.
I gotta say, I wasn't really surprised that it was Vergil. That, and not starting a new paragraph for each new speaker occasionally (e.g when somone says one or two words between someone else speaking you seem to keep it in the one paragraph) are my only negatives for this. But they're not awfully big ones, and I'm only pointing out that paragraph thing as a way of "constructive criticism". And I suppose Vergil, and Azera probably not being human, were the only things I predicted.

Good things are pretty much everything else. Character development for your OC's are pretty solid, as well as the way the story is unfolding. I'm certainly curious to see where it's going, it's got me hooked. Everyone is interacting well with one another, and there doesn't seem to be any OOC-ness.
So yes, I do enjoy reading this, and I'm keen to find out what's happening next. Update son!
Lol.

(BTW, sorry if I sound a bit self-righteous or up myself with this, but I think that a review should be do more than just be like "OMG, AWESOME!". They should give you things to think about)

wow I didn't think there was anyone who didn't like Dante,you obviously don't since you just turned him into a little ** who got man-handled by a human.

*Squeals like a pig*
OHMAGOODNESS!
YAYS FOR AN UPDATE!
Now, when's the next one coming? XD
I read the part with Trish and Lady, and I was like, "IF ONLY YOU KNEW!"
Anywho, Ima hurt you if you suddenly discontinue this. (Not that I think you would, but just so you know. There are some amazing fics out there, and the authors never update... T_T)

I ish now infatuated with your ficcy! UPDATE SOON! Please?

I would die if you didn't... And you know, I don't think that would be a pleasant experience...