Considering the title is "The Long Awaited Confession", I expected it to be focusing on the confession...though I was disappointed to see that it ended with a somewhat random romantic moment, if you ask me. No build up of feelings or anything...just a random kiss, that wasn't really convincing, in my opinion that Akira would do something like that.

Nonetheless, it was well written, and fun to read.

What? Is that the ending? I never imagined about kiss in this fanfic? Well... I am not see the end in this story, akira got jealous because sai is close to hikaru.

Well, hahaha... So hikaru still countinous his promise to akira and know he has to fulfill his promise hohoho... i already waiting for this. Hohoho... See you in the last chap.

Greeeaaattt. Hikaru beat akira, well i think akira disapointed know because hikaru wouldnt tell akira the truth about sai. Well what happen next? I would read the next one then. See you.

So hikaru beat akira that cool, well i want to know how will hikaru would tell akira and how akira reaction? Well i have to read the next part then.

Nice shusaku... But that bad he have to die in the young age.

Poor sai,

This is very well written :) and wonderfully interesting. All of it.

Except there's this one sentance "He lets me have my childish ways with him". I know what you mean, but given that this sentence has a ton of connotations and is overly used with such connotations everywhere, you may want to word it differently. It's also a little awkward. I'd say the "with him" is uneccessary.

Great ending! cant wait to check out the sequel

I loved the first prolouge, becuas eit was so sad. I liked the other two as well (even though i don't understand why Sai called Hikaru Shindou oô') but after that, the story somehow lost the fire and became dull. Like something you've read way to often.

Still, it's a somewhat nteresting idea.

Woah. Akira getting drunk. O_o lol?

I like how you stuctured the confession. If there is ever a sequel to Hikaru no Go, I really hope there is a scene like this one in it

Good job Love it

Ah.. When I saw the word 'confession' and the summary I never thougt that I will see this scene. Not that I don't like it hehehe _