Very cute story. I loved how you depicted the teams dynamic :)

This was delightful. Really fluffy :)

Lovely! But now I can't help but wonder... how DID Tony get that scar he wouldn't tell Ziva about? (Did I somehow miss reading it? That's what happens while reading fanfic at 1AM...)

Turned out great! Really enjoyed it.

Only just now found this - very nice.

Loved it! Great story )

I'm glad you kept everyone in character, sometimes authors make Ziva too sappy or make Gibbs some yelling psycho, ya know? Lol good job on not doing either of those!

I reviewed one of your other stories, but have now read almost all of the ncis ones except one- whne I should have been asleep long ago! But couldn't stop. So, I like your style of writing; and your storylines. Write some more...

Terrific piece. Great characterization and very believable progression. You have a terrific way of balancing humour and heavier subjects, much the same way the show does. This story is really beautifully done.

this is so beautiful. :) so beautiful. the subtle and beautiful evolution of them is so true to the characterization of tony and ziva. thank you for sharing.

They're so cute together. I love McGee in your story. In fact i love all your story.

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This was very very good. I really liked how their relationship was believable. Both of them remained pretty much in character. It was extremely well written. Good job.

You may not be all that happy with this story, but just to let you know.. I loved it. ) From the comfortable and loving relationship between Tony and Ziva where they are sharing stories about scars and talking about the case and the poor little girl, to their relationship with Gibbs and of course McGee. I really liked how Gibbs was being so like.. understanding of their relationship, oh! and how he hopefully kicked that mans butt for bringing kids into the murder.. and murdering someone in general! ( And how sweet it was at the end where the three partners were walking to the parking garage and talking about going out to get drinks. At first I felt kinda bad cause McGee was disappointed with them saying no, but I think you wrote it perfectly with Ziva suggesting dinner at the place he had been talking about and smacking Tony and him saying like 'pound it for bacon' and Abby coming along. I really did like this story if it means anything )

Can't wait to read more of your stories!

I like it! i think its really good. Very sweet.

So cute! I love it!

Again,I liked the scene with Tim,'A neat little bow',the have totally internalized the team and the things you have them say and do are just so in character..Loved every single piece of dialogue and your oh,so descriptive and evocative narrative. Just beautiful...*sigh*