I love how Jack remembers little fragments of Ianto the whole way, it's lovely.

I was really upset at Day 5, but seeing that Jack's going to keep on going for Ianto is lovely.

It's wonderful how you've shown Jack's feelings, and not just had him sitting sobbing. It's awesome to see him really thinking about Ianto )

Fantastic story.

Oh, I'm so glad I found this. I love Jack's internal monologue as he replays those memories of Ianto, and how deep inside, he wants to search for something that can bring Ianto back to him.

I also like your characterizations of Jack and Gwen and how the two interplay with one another. I think you got their voices down very well.

Lovely story. I hope you consider continuing Jack's search and see where he goes with this!

I loved it!

And yes, i cried the whole way through COE day 4 & day 5 twas very sadd...

I still cant believe they killed off Ianto ... i felt soo sorry for Gwen & Jack.

I cant believe that Jack kept running ... I never thought he'd be the one to keep running ... i think he's learned he's lesson from the Doctor lol...

really enjoyed it ... tearss :'(

well done

x

*cries*

This was so amazing! Realy sad, but so amazingly written. Ianto :,(! Oh poor Jack:(!

I'm glad you gave him hope. My end just left him empty.

I would like to think that Jack is actually doing something instead of just leaving because he feels its too much for him so I take this story as acceptable and very well written. Wonder if they will do another season...

we havent seen ep 5 yet here in australia yet until later today loved your story and does any one know what happened to iantos body do you see it at all in ep 5 or are we left wondering if as they are removing the bodys they find that hes not dead but in a coma that way if there is a series four and jack comes back it would really set up the start of season four when you see the interview that was done on british breakfast before ep 1 went to air they were talking to eve and gareth both said if there was a season four they would come back so how can he be permanatly dead if he said he would come back make you think any way injoyed your story it keeps the hope alive because as we know with sci fi any thing is possible