I like confused Goku. Very nice.

Great fic. Thank you for writing it.

Aw! *brushes teeth* so sweet!

That was just gorgious. The ending just took my breath away! You have an amazing way with words and a great sence of reality. Really, REALLY well done!

Well that was good and alote of the story made sence too.

I started snooping in your writers closet picking thru the old fanfics and found this very enjoyable DBZ story.

So...this was the beginning, huh? You did an outstanding job on this piece considering what you had to work with (you're perception is awesome). I only say this because relations and romance between Goku & ChiChi always has been pretty vague. Yes, I know they got married and had kids but, other than that I felt ChiChi was no more to Goku than Krillin or Yamcha. That's why I like this story, it shows that there was a "bond" between them and that Goku (for all his save the world, even if I die mentality) loved his woman. Nice job!

P.S. You can tell I miss your updates! I've been rereading your Mir/San trilogy and now I'm reading your first fafics (Sigh!). What's a girl to do? Hurry back! Ja ne!

GOKU AND CHICHI are the greatest and most under-rated couple ever! Thank you for the touching fanfic! I especially love tht vampiric moment! That was very different!

I reeeeeaaaallly like it! It's so very cute, entertaining, lovable, amazing, GREAT! I loved it! It's really great!

::sniff:: this is so sweet! ::pouts:: where's my goku?

Well that was sweet. Very sweet. a wee bit too sweet. ANyway I guess I've just been watching too much Behind the Music. I'm a cynic.

This was reeeeaaally good. I especially liked the ending there! So true! :)

*wiping eyes* that was so beautiful

Wow!...that was ABSOLUTELY AMAZING!...no kidding...*grins*...this was a FANTASTIC FIC!...i LOVED IT!...it was very touching, and i think it was very true to goku's character...GREAT STUFF!...please write more of this story...i would definitely read it if ya did...good luck with the reviews!...HAPPY NEW YEAR!...;D

That was a beautiful chapter. Please continue. Happy Holidays.

wow how awesome!