I find this pairing fascinating. True, I do love a good Tryan, but I feel like Jason and Troy go really well together too. I think this was very well done. I love your work. If one was to be completely realistic, that probably is how things would be going on in Jason's head. I hope to see more from you in the future.

Though I'm not really interested in this pairing at all and found Jason a rather dull character in the films anyway, I decided to give this a shot. What the hell.
I am very glad I did.
You are a very, very good writer. This is really... introspective. It's so cool that you made basically a two-dimensional character from the films (Jason) into a very dynamic character with... conflict, emotions and a certain kind of intelligence that was entirely in-keeping with the character while also making him significantly more interesting and deep. Great job.
While I'm still not really interested in this pairing, I really, really enjoyed reading this. You're a very good writer.
Cheers,
Old Fiat
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WADE!

YOU'RE BACK!

AWESOME!

This was interesting... loved trason...

Glad to see you're writing again...

keep it up!!

~tG

there id more right?

It's been so long since you've last written anything! I'm so glad that you're finally back and writing again, even if they are just short one shots :)

I know what you mean about trying to get back into the writing mood. I've been updating my stories lately so that I can get used to writing again. It's been a good year since I've last written anything.

I really hope you come around to writing some very epic and great stories! Just like By Moonlight, Gravelight, and Starlight. Those were absolutely amazing! :) But now I'm just rambling, so I'll just say that I hope this is a start to some great stories very soon!

:)