Very, very well done. I especially love your recap of the scene where Penelope puts her hands over his.

You write very poetically. It was fascinating to read.

The middle (and largest) paragraph has a few grammatical errors riddled through it, but otherwise I throughly enjoyed your story.

Thank you so much for writing it :)

That was really beautiful. I think you really caught Johnny's state of mind during the time. It was very moving.

More! I want more! Penelope! Please!

Very nice :) You do Johnny justice.

Good job!

Lovely work.

Much Love,

Santiva Potter

hey,

Just finished watching penelope, and I immediately went looking for fanfic, 'cause the movie just blew me away. It was fun, refreshing, and I just love the two leading actors, their talent and their chemistry together. I hoped, but thought I wouldn't find any. Needless to say I was pretty siked when I saw a couple of them. But On top of that, I'm so thankful that what I read was pretty amazing too, and not some brainless drabble. This was poignant, and very true to character. Your style, fluency, talent is A-quality shit, hon! and I just want to thank you for the time and effort you invested in writing this! THANK YOU! cheers! Mie

Good insight into his thoughts! :D

You are an astounding writer. This is amazingly poetic.