Wow...very moving, yet very distant. I can picture this as a graphic novel; not much dialogue, lots of imagery: it's got the potential, it would work well.

I've only got a few more of your Sandman fics to read; they're really well written. I hope you write more very soon.

With respect,

ElfLover

Very interesting. I like it :)

Wow. Whew! great story! more please! :-)

Interesting idea . . . well written, too. It's got a distinct "flavor" to it that speaks of the bleached walls in your story, but more alive...y'know? Maybe you don't. *Grins* But, anyway, I'm impressed! You've captured some emotions in here that some people would say are "better left alone," but I think that just adds more life to it . . . it seems real, too. Not quite the Gaiman style Endless story, but unique and different . . . overall? I liked. Muchly so. _

You are an excellent writer. This is my first impression of your work. I hope you continue to express your thoughts and dreams in such lucid and articulate terms. Good luck in your endeavours. AndyC

Wonderful! Smooth as silk.