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Lawliet's Bride
2009-12-10 . chapter 3
PLEAZE UPDATE SOON! this is an interesting story! I can't wait to see the confrontation between her and Mamoru (if there is one for all I know Alice and Jasper might intercept her first or show up as soon as they meet hehehe)anywho I'll be waiting for updates!!keep up the good work :)
musikazen
2009-12-04 . chapter 1
Unique. You start in the middle, and build it gradually. I also love your interpretation of the characters and their relationships. As well as not being cliche, with the whole trying to find out and the cullens being able to find out her secrets. So really good job. And I hope you update this because its really,really, really good.
Ski Chick
2009-11-11 . chapter 3
I absolutely love this story,especially that Usagi has that air of mystery that the Cullens can't figure out, and I really hope that Usagi ends up with Mamoru! They just belong together

But whoever she is paired off with this is an amazing story and I hope you update soon
OmgitsBlondie
2009-10-24 . chapter 3
awh, I really hope Usagi doesn't leave Jasper and Alice for that a$$hole. Please update soon :)
Andy
2009-10-20 . chapter 3
Ooh i love it love it love it! I acant wait for the next chapter! ITs getting better with every chapter! I cant wait to find out what happens! Oh please update soon!
umi-neptune
2009-10-01 . chapter 3
First I would like to say I am sorry for not reviewing sooner. I love this story and I check at least once a week to see if you are working on this story on your livejournal. I have been a fan of your stories for awhile now, and I am happy to see this story. I am so loving your Usagi/Jasper/Alice pairing. Have not found or seen anything like this before never thought it about a threesome pairing.

You make it work though the writing the back story all work wonderfully. Looking forward to seeing them fight for their girl and I hope you add the flashback on the way they got together. Part of me is so hoping that this story will be longer than four chapters. Any chance you might make this longer or maybe a prequel?

Anyways I just wanted to finally review and thank you for this story and maybe do a lil begging if need be for a new chapter ahem so um here comes the begging part.

Please please oh pretty oh brilliant writer please can we have another chapter :((.
themoonmaiden
2009-08-29 . chapter 3
If Mamoru asks her to take him back, I hope Usagi kicks him in the shin and then go back to living happily ever with Jasper and Alice. I'm kinda hoping Usagi ends up marrying them (or at least, Jasper). It's weird that she's just the girlfriend. Can't wait to read more.
xxxandraaa
2009-08-28 . chapter 3
This chapter was amazing and I can only hope that you'll continue updating so fast ^_^
And I would really, really love to read prequel (and sequel would be awesome too ;) ).
I can't wait to read what will happen when Usagi meets Mamoru, and if Alice and Jasper will see them together.
Rayne-Mitchelle
2009-08-28 . chapter 3
OMG! I love it I love it I love it! Please write more soon! I can not wait to read the next xhapter... for that matter the whole thing!
Moon Mage Goddess
2009-08-27 . chapter 3
Aw, I got a special thank you! *^_^* Thank you for that, that was so sweet!


SHWE! Alright, I loved this chapter! And Usa 'finally' did something to show that she really isn't human - go Uranus! Haha. Bet Edward will have a headache from trying to figure out how the Hades she avoided him!

Hm... I"m wondering now if Mamoru wants to see her to talk about getting back together, and the Cullens happen to be watching and hear... OK - I need the next chapter! *^_^*

I can't wait for the next one - I was not kidding when I said I love your originality!

Eagerly waiting for more-
~Sandreline
Lady Light
2009-08-27 . chapter 3
Wow, very nicely written.
hypa angel
2009-08-27 . chapter 3
YAY! I got up this morning and was greeted with two new updates from my favourite list- whats better than that? I was almost late for work but who cares? Lol, I loved the new chapter and I feel sorry for Jazz and Alice- afterall, they don't know whats going on and why she won't talk to them...not that I can blame Usagi..she thought he was out of her life and then blam! He suddenly wants to see her again.

You must keep her with the Cullens! Not only is it a completely adorable pairing its the only one I've seen that invloves Jazz and Usagi and whats better than that?

I hope to see a new chapter up soon and I look forward to reading it as soon as it does! Keep up the good work! Also, I would love to see a prequel to all of this...or a sequel...whichever one you decide to do- mostly because it would be interesting to see their future together or even delve into their past a bit more.

Anyway, please update soon!
Labores Solis
2009-08-27 . chapter 3
Ack! This was so good!! Can't wait for the next update!
angel313
2009-08-26 . chapter 3
Awesome. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Daphne Tomorrow
2009-08-26 . chapter 3
aw...i love jaspers memories of her, and that he actually has some character and i like how he says darlin'...its just too cute! are they going to find out who/what usa really is? i wonder what mamoru wants...dun dun dun...can't wait until the next chapter!
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