I love this story so far, and can only expect a better second chapter. Continue please, because this one of the first AxelxRoxas story I DYING to see what'll happen next. ^-^

hehehe! this looks like its going in a good direction!

ha ha, axel did come across as slightly creepy. i hope they have some good plans in store cuz roxy needs to live a little!

This is very interesting and I wish to read more.