OK THAT WAS TOTALLY AW-SOME! HECK!!1 I'm STILL laughing!HIS-TERICAL!

Funny man! I liked the socks and the cd bit. DZ

Lol:D! My bro and i were killin ourselves at this!

Yargh! Sehr sehr lustig! Favourite lines were:

--“I found it!” Reep held up an eight-pack of heavy duty socks.
--“…But I am a woman!” Garth cried.
--“Here you are,” he handed her a package of Shnerples. “Those’ll take care of any problems you may have.” “….Thanks,” Tinya said.
--He took a wet floor sign and moved it onto a carpeted area. “Is that fun enough for you?” Kell asked.
--He ‘re-alphabetatized’ the entire music collection,
--“Well, I don’t exactly know what it’s called, but it goes like this… DA DA LALALA DUN DUN DUN DUH DENENENE HEY O A O PING PUNG PONG-” “Oh, why didn’t you just say so?” the employee handed him a CD titled ‘Sounds of the Ocean’.

E! Imagining Kell singing that is just hilarious!

that was really...¡FUN! YAY XD i never taught i could read about the legionaries doing that jajajaja por VP XD

Okay, I have to read that book.
Do you know where can I find the ebook?
Question: Do walmart managers call the fatal 5 whenever the legion hits the place? They should.
You've answer one of the big questions in life? G.I.JOE or Barbies? I always thought that the stupid pink doll will conquer... But I didn't count with Barney. My bad.
Great gift. Certainly, The V.P. will enjoy it.
I'm afraid to ask... How it is when Superman goes to Walmart? Does he go with Justice League?

Very cute! Nice use of that particular Internet meme.

~Asterisk*

This story made me smile.

If I remember correctly, one of them should have danced along with the store music and then curled up screaming when the intercom came on, saying "NO NO IT'S THE VOICES AGAIN"
Or maybe that was how to get kicked out of Wal-Mart

LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL! That was hillarious!!

I liked the socks thing, and the sounds of the ocean, and the barbe/g.i-joe war. It made me laugh a lot! I'm favorite-ing it!

Hmm i've read those walmart jokes and this was a nice Legion envisioning of those!

Oh my goodness, I couldn't stop laughing! That was hilarious, great story!

Hi! So glad to hear/see you are still writing! Totally loved your story! Lately I have been writing Witchblade fanfiction! I've got one which is a oneshot, the other one is an ongoing story which has two chapters so far. Take a looksie at my stories on LiveJournal.

http://eternal_moonie.

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