This was pretty good. I think you should continue it.

The idea of Qui-Gon and Shmi getting married is sweet, however a few mistakes marred the story for me. Obi-Wan is their son? Just a goof up or what? I don't mean to sound like the story stinks, because it doesn't. I was just a little confused at the Obi-Wan thing.

Interesting.

I, too, totally think Shmi and Qui-Gon would've made a very cute couple.

Red Bess Rackham

Really nice story. I never thought of Shmi and Qui-gin. Really I didn't think of her having any romance, but I do agree with you. They would have made a good couple. Write some more about this couple. I'd love to see where you would take it.

, that was kinda wierd.

I think this is a really nice story and I hope you add more to it.

It would be a perfect universe.I really think you should continue.

I loved this story. It was so sweet.

Very cute storyt! I like it...

You are my last review for the evening. I have to tell you. It's very good. I've read one Shmi/Qui-gon fanfic before but it didn't involve romance. It was still good, but this one is great.

Oh, I must agree. I believe in Qui/Shmi.

(My postulation is that Beru is their daughter.)

A sweet vignette.

Good story

Sweet! I liked it.

very good and creative. I liked how all of them were a family, plan on adding more? I give it a 9.

That was quite confusing... i didn't quite get that it was an alternate universe till the end... obi-wan.. qui and Shmi's kid... i dunno.. seems kinda.. wierd... oh well, good writing anywho.