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dancingqueensillystring
2010-01-03 . chapter 4
Awesome job! I really like the plot. It's very original. I like the way we're slowly having more information revealed to us. It makes the story more suspenseful. Please update soon.
k
2010-01-01 . chapter 4
please please please continue
foreversnow
2009-12-28 . chapter 4
You have to update soon! This is way too good...
Geniusly-Unique
2009-12-11 . chapter 4
Um... Ug. Zombie gunk. XD! On a different not:
Is Temari zombified or seriously injured? I'm guessing zombified cuz to take a bite of someone's shoulder means to get a little saliva in their body. Especially if you're a drooling, mindless zombie.
Da-Le-Uh
2009-12-06 . chapter 4
Gah!
You can't kill Temari you just can't!
no no no no
You Kill Gaara then Kankuro and now Temari! :[
Why kill the sand Siblings?
Their awesome!
Well anyway
Great job on this Chapter!
Your a good writer :)

Just don't Kill TEMARI!

:D
cardboard boxes
2009-10-27 . chapter 4
T-Temari! And Shino too...so then, are all of them going to die until only Kiba is left? Will help ever come? Man...
Please update soon!
Loco-Jan
2009-10-20 . chapter 4
no!
its liek naruto all over again! everyones dying!
Dx
OxymoronPrincess
2009-10-20 . chapter 4
NOO. God, I loved Temari, she was so kick ass.
Madame Band Geek
2009-10-19 . chapter 4
*cue fanspaz*

OH CHRIST.

You know, the other day I was thinking about this. Really randomly (okay, not so randomly, since my friend was watching Dawn of the Dead in her dorm room, and I joined her). And it's really every bit as awesome as I remember, and it keeps getting better.

Have I said before that I love Kiba as a narrarator? Cuz I really really do. It really suits the story well, and I like being inside his head.

On the other hand, so much death. It's sad. :(

And once again, I can't wait to see what happens.
fallin.sunshine
2009-10-19 . chapter 4
you know what? i love you. sinceriously.
plus, you write kiba so well that i am totally jealous. you have my undying adoration. i may have to stalk you.
x
x l a z y p s y c h o
2009-10-19 . chapter 4
whee~

I [can't] wait for the next chapter.
midday.dreams
2009-10-19 . chapter 4
damnit. at the beginning of this chapter, i was all, "aw, temari and kiba! too cute!"

and now she's going to turn into a zombie.

damnit. djskaghfkld. temari's like, my favorite chick! D: i hpoe they find a cure or...something. and if shino's dead-dead, then i'll cry.

and...so will kiba. >>

but anyway, awesome chapter. it's like...hmm...i was gonna say a clever simile right about now, but i got nothing. basically it's awesome. :)

good luck with the applications!!

xoxo,
rrbow
Strawberry Raindrops
2009-10-19 . chapter 4
that was awesome! lotsa gory details. xD
OMG TEMARI, SHINO~~ :( Nu!! T__T;
Please, PLEASE update soon! I absolutely LOVE this story. <3
PiecesHateScorpios
2009-10-18 . chapter 4
Oh, poor Temari and Shino... The girls will all be devestated... Also, I do wonder what that little Orochimaru thing is about...

Anyway, Great Chapter!

PHS.

P.S the Resident Evil movies are pretty cool. My mates and I watched the first one back in 6th grade for Halloween. They're not really scary... As for the games... they're a bit freaky.
-delicate.desires
2009-10-18 . chapter 4
No~! Temari! ): Oh god! Well, this story is really awesome, and I can't wait to see what happens next! Please update soon!
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