This was so very beautiful. Your words hold such power. I cried. Thank you.

Keep writing.

ok so im REALLY glad you decided to share it because it is REALLY amazing

its so deep and different to alot of TATTwards out there,

it really is fantastic..

the ending was just perfect.

i dont even really know what to say because i am in awe i really am..

in a way its a little dark.. but i think thats why i liked it so much...

really seriously fantastic

Gah, I absolutely loved this! You definitely have a way with words that is remarkable. I hope you'll decide to share more of your work with us, if the rest of it is as good as this than its too good not to be shared!

It's realy good, we get all the fillings the have for each other.

Good luck for the contest

That was gorgeous. It was breathtaking to read. The imagery was fantastic and the way you wove the words into this tragic story was brilliant. Great job! Continue writing!

Oh holy night!

I do hope that you write more! This was amazing. So original, so fresh, so...WOW!

I don't even know where to start or go with this review other than to say... don't stop writing. This was so very well written and I couldn't stop reading it! Amazing! Hope to see more from you!

xoxo

jennie

Well, I about passed out when I read that you hadn't posted a story before. I've read a ton of entries for contests, a ton of ff stories, a ton of books in general, and let me tell you, you have a gift. I sincerely hope you continue writing and especially hope you post a story so I can read it, review it, and rec it.

Your word play is gorgeous. There's a lyrical quality to your writing that is so impressive. You switched POVs seamlessly and normally I can't stand switching povs so much but you made it work brilliantly. I felt their pain, their pleasure, their sadness, the gravity of their love and loss. Excellent, excellent job and I really, really hope you go on to post more of your writing.

So intense and amazing! Loved it!

FUCKING AWESOME!

Excellent!

Wow. For your first fanfic this is pretty amazing and intense. I loved it! Great job!

WOW...that was really good! It was more than just a story, it was almost like poetry. Great job!

Loved it. Very beautifully written.

This was a beautifully written take on the canon B/E and I loved what you did with it and the way you wove the ink into the story to not seem unnecessary or just there for shits and giggles.

Wonderfully written.

Bri

This story was beautiful and well worth a review. You have used a lovely writing style and the story holds it's own. Great work.