Aw that was cute! You should totally make a sequel!

Awesome episode tag. I liked Macy's relationship with Carl a lot, and you have to love jealous Kevin. Carl's plan was great, and I really like how JONAS wasn't more important than her team or game. And the fact that Kevin was happy to be scolded like everyone else was fantastic.

I love Macy UPDATE!

Huh. Carls is a mastermind. That was awesome! Great job! xD

Haha, that was so funny. (:

Really well written! Awesome concept, I never pieced that part of the volleyball net to Macy until now! Great job!

that was so cute! totally adorable! even if i would have loved to read more macy/kevin interaction.

the whole conversation between the group was funny though!

as far as i can say, all in character and totally enjoyable!

great fic!

yours

me

This was really sweet. It was nice to see Shoe in a positive light, and to see a different side of Macy. Plus, who doesn't love a jealous Kevin? I loved the last line too.

You've made me really really love Shoe! And that's no easy task.

You know what I love about this fic? Well, a number of things. But one of them is that you've taken a scene from the episode and expanded on it in an original, creative and believable way. Sounds simple, but it's not. It requires thinking about what you see beyond the main story your being fed. What a weird way to put it. Sorry.

"Macy wasn’t one to deny a girl of her Jonas fan moments, but…not during a GAME! Games were sacred." Beautifully in character. I wish so badly that we could see some of that fire onscreen more often. But that would require that they develop Macy beyond mere comic relied and it seems slow in coming unfortunately.

I love the boys discussion/debate of whether Shoe and Macy could really be a dating or not. And that little fist bump was really cute. I also find it fantastic that Joe's being the reasonable one and is staunch in his assurance that they are NOT into eachother that way. Awesome.

“Did I mention that I’m a member of Jonas and am awesome at power slides.” Kevin's line there was so adorable. Like a little boy after getting caught with his hand in the cookie jar. Or however that saying goes.

But I have to say my favorite closing image has to go to "Macy pok[ing] Joe’s chest repeatedly with an accusing finger." HAHAHA love it! :D

This was sweet. My favorite line, though. It had to be:

“Oh, nice word usage, bro,” Nick told his brother as they bumped fists.

“Thanks, I’m following this word of the day thing on Twitter. It’s really awesome. It gives you a word and a definition for every day and-“

Seriously, I cracked up.

Laura

OMG, you rock for writing this! Man, it never even occurred to me that Macy would, obviously, have been at the game.

Jeaslous!Kevin was perfect! "Macy and Shoe frolicking in some sort of field…in slow motion no less and dramatic underscoring too!" Love, love, love! And many giggles at Kevin willing to sacrifice himself to superfan!Macy in lieu of dealing with angry sporty!Macy.

You made Shoe likable, too!

It was all so well written and so in character.

Thank you so ridiculously much for writing this! Awesomeness! :D

Totally different from most stories and I like that. You left knowing there is a little something there. I especially like how Macy isn't all fangirl in this. :)

I like it, jelous Kevin is fun to read about.

This was amazing! I love you didn't end it with a kiss like most stories, but more of a little glimmer of hope. The whole anger - friends theory was amazing! Wow! I am stunned!

Not only was this beautifully written, but it was totally plausible and in character.

“No frolicking for you, Shoe.”

LOL.

xD

See what I mean by IC?

I loved it!

Favoriting!

Love, Lime. 3

Aw! I love the note that ended on, it was so sweet! My favorite image from this is easy: Shoe and Macy frolicking in a field (with dramatic underscoring!), but my favorite line is harder. I don't know if I like “Yep, and they grabbed him like a freshly made pancake,” or “Did I mention that I’m a member of Jonas and am awesome at power slides" best. It's just too hard to choose. Regardless, this was awesome. I never really liked Shoe, but you made him shine in this (and in pursuit of Kevin/Macy! Yay!). I applaud!