This is a great story! I love the character youve made oliver wood into and also katie bell. please try and update soon!

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Just have to say I loved this and that womanizing Oliver Wood. Really hoping for an update soon!

Aw, it's cute. A couple of pointers though, if you don't mind.. You should try and switch up sentence structure and the layout of your chapters. Try not to have every line start with a quoted piece of dialogue. Also, I think you meant 'Triumphant return' NOT triumvirate. a triumvirate is a coalition of three magistrates in political office, i.e the first triumvirate and second triumvirate of Ancient Rome. Finally, you mean Veela, I think. Not velia.

very good and quite funny

Ha! I love Katie's reaction at the end of the first chapter. You seem to really be getting somewhere here. I love the idea, and I can't wait to read more! Update Soon!

'til next time,
EP

can't wait for chapter 2

I like this idea of a story and can't wait for the next chapter, good start!

Good story!
typical of oliver to get all the girls. lmao