This was so well written, I absolutely adored it.

I love this. This almost makes me want to question Zelos' sanity only for the fact that he's so seemingly broken, but the idea that Lloyd helps keep him together isn't something I've thought of before. The same for Sheena too, and the mentioning of her being afraid of Lightning immediately made me think of Volt and how she overcame that adversary as well.

Also, the smut was fabulous. You can have my heart now. First story I've read for this pairing and woopie I'm hooked.

This is. Oh my. This is beautiful and wonderufl and perfect and I think I just came because THEY ARE MY FAVOURITE. And I just. I just. I don't even. Have words. Or anything.

Wow. Your writing is absolutely beautiful! And I loved your portrayal of Zelos. Wonderful job.

wooooooooow the sexy scene was like rly intense i loved it!

This was amazing. I loved your portrayal of both characters and the flashbacks made me laugh. The reflection on Lloyd was an interesting addition ("sometimes you need a third") and the focus on Zelos' mixed feelings about him added depth to the relationship. I don't usually read smut, but this was really well done. The last section was depicted more emotionally than pornographically and the language used was very desciptive. Keep up the good work!

That is beautiful. You use excellent language choices and the entire mood is clear. Your in-character-ness is superb, I love your headcanon, and you managed to render one of the people I showed this to speechless, which has happened only a handful of times in human memory.

Basically, this is my favorite couple, and you have written probably one of the greatest fics I've read for them. Congrats!

Haha, I'm still trying to figure out what Lloyd did when he 'happened', but nonetheless, this is a really beautiful piece. I mean, I'm so used to falling in love with details and imagery, but this piece really somehow makes sparse work. The characters still across so vividly, especially Zelos. I just love how he seems to have a whole patchwork quilt personality, he choses to be an idiot here and then be serious there; it really just goes to emphasize what a broken and fragmented character he is. Overall, this is really well done. Please write more for this fandom? 8D

Your writing is BEAUTIFUL.

I was so moved and touched by this story.

Well done! :)

Your gift for language is undiminished. I liked this best:

He could make her laugh, but he couldn't keep her from crying.

Awesome story! The whole thing is in character, and it's nice to see things from Zelos' perspective for once. I can relate to him very much, so I like his point of view.

That was beautiful. I'm so glad to see such a well written and poignant Symphonia fic. Kudos, ma'am. Kudos.

I... I absolutely adore this work. Absolutely, absolutely. Where have you been all my life?

I like seeing Zelos portrayed in a darker light-perhaps it's the influx of people saying "Zelos wouldn't do x, y, z because he's just a stupid pervert!", but you've touched just the right part of my brain to convince me that maybe, he is in fact, a little bit crazy. He really is one of those genius-mastermind types. With all that time to himself (because let's face it, when he's talking to airheaded nobles, his mind is allowed to be elsewhere), he's eventually *got* to think about how jealous he is of Lloyd.

This fanfic pinpoints the exact perfect moment for a Zelos/Sheena situation to happen, with the addition of Lloyd. Before reading this story, I did not like to accept Lloyd/Sheena, even though it's canon here and there, and even though I'm forced to write it as it exists as such. After reading? The way you've portrayed all three of them is so true to character, yet with that menacing jealous edge that makes me just... oh, god, I can accept it all. And I see Lloyd where he truly is.

Plus, your writing style... is just superb. Your word choice and flow can convince me of the world. Not saccharine, not too dark, not anything at all except exactly what I wanted to read. (Why is there not more Z/S porn I swear to god?)

If I don't stop picking out my favorite details right this second, I think I could go on forever. You've made my night, week, possibly month after agonizing over how I feel like this fandom, specifically this pairing, is dead. Thank you, thank you so very much for sharing this.

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Wow. This is beautiful. Dark, yet hopeful. A lovely character analysis and look at how, for a moment, people can find themselves lost when everything around them changes before they finally figure out how to find themselves and each other again. I will definitely be reading this again and trying to pick up on all the different layers to it. Thank you for sharing this with us!

That was seriously beautiful. I loved all of it.