When will you be updating?

this is a really cool story so far, i hope you continue it someday!

You must update this brilliance. Immediately.

So, yeah, I looked into another one of your Malik centered longfics (aren't they all? Never mind…) and actually… I like even more than the other. "Ningyo" made me practically skip a beat with the tension. You gave such refined pieces of information in such low scales it made me… nervous. In a good way. There was just this overall feeling of danger underneath the surface. I was a little nervous to read "Ningen" since I was afraid it would spoil the mysterious aura around "Nngyo" and once again I was surprised for the better. You created a Malik that is a riddle (even more so than the original). Love it, please continue this soon… too.
And once again, thank's for writing a Malik centered longfic. Gotta love them.

Give me a "C!"
Random people: C!
Gimme an "O"
RP: O!
Gimme and "ntinue please!"
Rp: Fail! *All waddle off to their semi-normal, uninteresting jobs as accountants and mall cops*

Ah, who needs em? Anyway, great story! Bakura has just the right combo of sneaky, devious, and bastard to make him awesome! And i just LOVE malik! Great work, please update soon!

Wow! I like this one even better than the first one. The characters are...eurgh this isnt going to come out NOT sappy...closer to my heart than the others. I mean, Sun-chan luffs the Kaiba brothers and Jounochi and Touzoku, but Sun-chan REALLY luffs the real Malik, Mariku, and ESPECIALLY Bakura!!

I also really liked the exchanges throughout. Mahaado and Marikus little banter and Bakuras treatment of Ryou all teasing and whatnot!! Yay!

Oh noes...its getting so late, but I HAVE to finish the fic. No time for a review on chapter two if Im gonna get one to chapter three!

But yesh! I like!
-Sunny

That was mean of Bakura... Good chapter though. XD More soon please?

Good chapter. They are all crazy including Ryou and Amane. I feel bad for Rishid.

Man I do love this story!! I'm sure that if YuGiOh! was still popular, this would be one of the most-read story ever!! But seeing as the YuGiOh name has been tarnished by GX and 5D's ... well, there's only a few of us still clinging to the awesome show that was the original.

I don't usually review, but I saw this only had 11 reviews and I had to do something about it! I wish I could review twice, but then I wouldn't have anything to say the second time around :P

I'll still be around when you update. Be encouraged! I'm sure there are lots of fans like me who are just too lazy usually to review.

That was AWESOME! More! More! (Please? XD)

this is a story I could definitely get into. I cant wait to read more!!

GOod chapter. I am so glad that Mariku got that out of the way. He really is sweet to Malik.

I adore it. I'm really glad Mahaado was wrong about Malik but at the same time I wonder if Malik would have reacted differently if he hadn't just gotten a raise.

Hint received ._.

Please do continue this. Ningyo was very intriguing and I'd really like to know all the back-story and events leading up to it :) As usual your writing is wonderful, and the characters are all spot-on. You're awesome. Even if this story doesn't receive much interest, it's just because the general public is stupid and doesn't know what's good for it. Okay? :) So please keep writing.

I like it. I always wondered what happened to the real Malik.