I just love your Luna.
She's perfectly in character, but you give her a depth JKR never did--you expand upon that character to make someone so completely lovable and heartbreaking and wonderful.
I don't write Harry/Luna (I like my Luna with George), but it's a ship I can see better in canon than Harry/Ginny, so kudos to you for writing it so well!!
Her honesty is endearing and has me blushing and embarrassed for both her and Harry.
It's lovely and wonderful. Thanks for sharing!

Very nice. I like Luna's commentary; it definitely seems like the sort of things she'd say. I didn't catch any typos, and I honestly can't think of any criticism, contstructive or otherwise. So, splendid job!
~Rae

funny and sweet. I'm not usually a fan of non-canon pairings in fics, butI enjoyed this. You caught Luna's odd ball sense of humour very well - I can just imagine poor Harry squirming with embarrassment!

Lol. Luna would so do that. It's why she's one of my favorite characors! :)

Thanks for a good laugh. It was very well written.

LOL well done - a nice little one-shot, and very convincing too. XD Though I don't normally read Harry/Luna fics, I really liked it! Good stuff. :D

They should have Luna the permanent commentator, she was brilliant and funny. Awesome.

This was so funny! McLaggen is such a prat!

Great. Moon Cultist Harry for the Win. Wanna bet this is what happened if Ginny hadn't used Amortentia (or whatever) on Harry? Because seriously, that's the only reasonable explanation for the "monster in his chest". Now with Luna on the other hand, we KNOW that the monster is a Froppling Dumdringler...

Aw, I really enjoyed this. It was funny and sweet and well-written

Great job ^.^

I was actually cringing while reading this! And yet, I love it! They all seem to be in character and I adored the interaction between Luna and Harry at the end, very sweet. The whole thing was marvelously funny!

I thought this was such a cute story! Very good!

That's wonderful, very funny, pretty creative. LOL !!

I always thought it was a shame that Harry went with Ginny over Luna becuse JKR could have done fun scenes like this!

Nicely done one shot!

lol..that was a very funny fic. lol