 China-kouran 2009-08-25 . chapter 1Oh my god that was depressing but still very beautiful. If the show ends like this I swear I'm going to be so mad! anyway it was very sweet and very depressing but as always I still loved it! |
 Wuchel1 2009-08-12 . chapter 1Very sad, but also very good. Thanks for sharing. |
 Elodie Wolfe 2009-07-24 . chapter 1Aie, I hope that's not what really happens in the show. I'm back! Ahah, yay internet in Bangladesh. Great short, absolutely wonderful.
Love Elodie~ |
 Rina-the-Brave 2009-07-22 . chapter 1I can't even express how much I loved this one. It was sad, but still sweet.
He couldn’t answer for the strange tightness in his throat. He felt her small, delicate hand grasp his. He thought that he hadn’t felt anything so good in a long time. The warmth of her, the softness of her skin.
Probably the closest he’d ever get to any sort of Heaven. In this life or the next.
*That was my favorite part*
~Rina |
 earthlydreamz 2009-07-14 . chapter 1Aw, another sad one. Very depressing, but very good nonetheless. Loved this one too. You express the extent of their heartbreak so well, great job. :) |
 Divinia Serit 2009-07-12 . chapter 1Aw! It was sad, but it was the right tone for the piece. I loved the moment when he heard about her injury on the tv. Just because you don't see it, doesn't mean its not there. So true, and beautifully written. Sigh. You're my favorite :) |
 mwalter1 2009-07-12 . chapter 1I hope Jane does kill RJ, but gets away with it. I'd hate to see him like this. |
 tromana 2009-07-12 . chapter 1Oh gosh. *sniffles* I loved it. I hope you don't mind, but can I nominate this for a Jellie on jello-forever? x tromana |
 lil smiles 2009-07-12 . chapter 1Oh wow, that was lovely, heartbreaking but still, very well written. Nominating this fic for sure!
"Once a year, they would sit with each other. Mostly in silence. Sometimes holding hands, reminding themselves that they were alive, even if they weren’t living."
*tear* That got me. |
 Auraya-of-the-White 2009-07-12 . chapter 1I loved this! Depressing stories are wonderful :D This is pretty realistic, I could see this ending. I'm one of the people who wants Jane to kill Red John. |
 MissNitaGirl 2009-07-11 . chapter 1this is an interesting senario
to write about i like ur orignality
very well written lots of secret
confessions
good job |
 PhoenixWytch 2009-07-11 . chapter 1Jane, you're an idiot.
Thanks for writing, even if it made me cry. |
 Arcadya 2009-07-11 . chapter 1You didn't lie. This was incredibly sad. I guess I always hold onto the hope that he won't kill Red John, so that he never has to go to prison. 'Cause that would so suck! Seriously.
I loved that he would only see Lisbon and even then they didn't really talk.
This was so sad but so perfect for if this actually happened.
Stupid Jane figuring the most important thing out too late. |
 kathiann 2009-07-11 . chapter 1Wow, that was depressing. I loved it. Does that make me messed up? That I love the depressing fics? Especially if they are done well, like this one. I can actually see this as a possibility, Jane ending up in prison and only coming to see him when he does something stupid, or Jane not wanting to see the team at all.
Anyway, I love this one. I'm glad you keep getting attacked with plot bunnies, and that you keep writing them. This is really really good. |