 Beth Nottingham 7/19/10 . chapter 4Rolling On The Floor Laughing My Fat Bum Off!
Omigosh, those were hillarious! That kid's got a lot of his mom in him... bad timing... lolz |
 Waifine 4/21/10 . chapter 4Wow. XD Poor Fakir. He and children... ya.
I hope you write more of these soon! They're amazing and wonderful and WRITE! You write the most fantastic post-series human-Ahiru and Fakir adventures Please write on! |
 Waifine 4/21/10 . chapter 3This was was absolutely beautiful. |
 Waifine 4/21/10 . chapter 2Aww. Fakir sucks. He's awesome. But really. Wow. Poor Ahiru! ;_; Mytho was absolutely fantastic. "You're on your own." Aka: abandon the sinking ship. now. HA! |
 Waifine 4/21/10 . chapter 1Dabbles! Hurray for dabbles!
And this first dabble was adorable and lovely all in one. Just, yey |
 Anonymous 4/7/10 . chapter 4 This is the cutest thing ever! |
 Colormyworld 3/30/10 . chapter 4Cute oneshots! I really enjoyed reading them. |
 Kashiko-chan 11/1/09 . chapter 4LMAO at this chapter.
I actually first thought that it was Ahiru that yelled...took me a while to figure it out. *gets brick'd* |
 WhiteFire56 10/11/09 . chapter 4 Awesome! It's funny how much everyone likes pushing Fakir's buttons. It was cute. |
 Full Shadow Alchemist 9/20/09 . chapter 4...I'm not going to lie. These oneshots are great. They're hillarious, in character and carry a certain level of intimacy that I enjoy in my romance stories. Wonderful work |
 Morei 7/31/09 . chapter 4lol, that last one was ADORABLE! keep writing |
 lemon-lime-whispers 7/17/09 . chapter 4aw this is adorable ) |
 James Birdsong 7/17/09 . chapter 4 Awesome. |
 James Birdsong 7/17/09 . chapter 3 Good) |
 Thunder Chicken 7/16/09 . chapter 4 I was a little... apprehensive as I began reading this.
Much to Fakir's utter HORROR, that kid's spent far too much time with his mother. Boy can pull his strings like a puppet... |