|Reviews for The Broken Wheel|
| WillowDryad 12/16/11 . chapter 5
That was lovely. Peter's chapter was so very sad.
| RhiannonAmidala 4/8/11 . chapter 5
Wow. You made me cry. Really cry. That was really powerful.
| Abject Tears 12/29/10 . chapter 5
This was so beautiful! An amazing rendering of the train crash. I loved the way you ended each chapter.
| Eavis 5/11/10 . chapter 5
Beautiful. The paramedic was just right.
| Stars-Eclipsed 4/4/10 . chapter 5
I'm crying. Peter's is so hard to read, its heartbreaking. beautiful, touching, heartrending take on the train wreck.
| Hiei-and-shino 11/20/09 . chapter 5
so, I'm crying like a little girl in here. Shit, it's not something that I'm very proud, but I have to say that to you understand that this fanfic is really awesome.
I just finished the book today, and my friend show me this amazing story and I can't help but ask you if I can translate the fanfic to my language, Portuguese.
You are an amazing writer, you know? ç_ç
A beautiful fanfic. Great job on that. I loved the scenes of Peter and Susan!
[Sorry if you don't understand something. I'm not very good in English]
| where the wind blows 10/25/09 . chapter 5
there are tears running down my face. and it take a lot to get me to cry. this story was very very good!
where the wind blows
| NarinaPrincess12 7/28/09 . chapter 5
Very good. I loved it. Your symbolism is fantastic! Brilliant job! Keep writing!
| BittersweetSummer 7/28/09 . chapter 5
Ah. Beautiful. I love the transitions.
I have to admit, Susan's chapter was my favorite, though.
It's a well-written story, and I enjoyed reading every word.
| Aslan is love 7/27/09 . chapter 5
wow I loved this espally Lucy's and Susan's parts
| Victoria Alatamir Wan 7/14/09 . chapter 5
OK, I just read the whole story without reviewing on all the chapters, and I'm very sorry for that. Really
But anyway, I love the story, and you had a really good idea. Susan's chapter is my favorite, personally. :)
| Russet022 7/14/09 . chapter 5
I love the transitions. They work very well to link the four. And is the wheel really broken if some day Susan might figure it all out? Well, I guess until then... Anyway. I love your Edmund, and, well, tears for Susan. Now I order you to write a happy fic! Just kidding. Angst, or just sad fics, are good. Obviously. :)
| Corilyne 7/13/09 . chapter 5
Wow. That was really beautiful. I liked it alot.
| Sentimental Star 7/12/09 . chapter 5
Beautiful. Sad. Heartbreaking. Heartwrenching. This was absolutely *gorgeous*! Poetry more than prose. So very well done!
| SpangleyPony 7/12/09 . chapter 5
Very original, a great way to capture the Pevensies. You did the right thing in rewritting Susan :) I always feel so sorry for her though