That was lovely. Peter's chapter was so very sad.

Well done.

Wow. You made me cry. Really cry. That was really powerful.

This was so beautiful! An amazing rendering of the train crash. I loved the way you ended each chapter.

Beautiful. The paramedic was just right.

I'm crying. Peter's is so hard to read, its heartbreaking. beautiful, touching, heartrending take on the train wreck.

so, I'm crying like a little girl in here. Shit, it's not something that I'm very proud, but I have to say that to you understand that this fanfic is really awesome.

I just finished the book today, and my friend show me this amazing story and I can't help but ask you if I can translate the fanfic to my language, Portuguese.

You are an amazing writer, you know? ç_ç

A beautiful fanfic. Great job on that. I loved the scenes of Peter and Susan!

Kisses!

[Sorry if you don't understand something. I'm not very good in English]

there are tears running down my face. and it take a lot to get me to cry. this story was very very good!

where the wind blows

Very good. I loved it. Your symbolism is fantastic! Brilliant job! Keep writing!

Emily

Ah. Beautiful. I love the transitions.

I have to admit, Susan's chapter was my favorite, though.

It's a well-written story, and I enjoyed reading every word.

:D

wow I loved this espally Lucy's and Susan's parts

OK, I just read the whole story without reviewing on all the chapters, and I'm very sorry for that. Really

But anyway, I love the story, and you had a really good idea. Susan's chapter is my favorite, personally. :)

V.

I love the transitions. They work very well to link the four. And is the wheel really broken if some day Susan might figure it all out? Well, I guess until then... Anyway. I love your Edmund, and, well, tears for Susan. Now I order you to write a happy fic! Just kidding. Angst, or just sad fics, are good. Obviously. :)

Russet

Wow. That was really beautiful. I liked it alot.

Beautiful. Sad. Heartbreaking. Heartwrenching. This was absolutely *gorgeous*! Poetry more than prose. So very well done!

Best Regards,

Sentimental Star

Very original, a great way to capture the Pevensies. You did the right thing in rewritting Susan :) I always feel so sorry for her though