continue this plz? :) AWESOME

this is sho nice!
i mean, its highly sweet(:
you should write mooree stories, i really like ur style(:

This isn't really angst but it's still lovely!! It makes the Thrill fangirl in me so, so happy. XD ♥

I loved their interactions! They're realistic and I can practically hear the conversations going on in my head xD; And the scenario and scenes are believable and they flow, too.

Shirt off, obviously! ♥ Good job!

fdbgkjh Ohohohohoho, I enjoyed this immensely, rage. XD Made me grin a whole lot and sgfhdfgfdh

Oh, Fuji. XD Fuji has got to be the most adorable thing ever and Ryoma being a brat to his agent, I pity the guy. XD

And, I -love- the last scene, I do. XD The dialogue flows so well, and well, I just really, really enjoyed it? XD

Actually, the last line has got to be the best. XD SHIRT OFF! XD

ily, rage~

-R

sold! i like the story. short and entertaining! more please?

This is such a great story! I really like it a lot. My only comment on it is... can you write some sort of sequel? No, honestly it has a potential of being a great multi-chapter story. I was reading it and I was like I wish there's a second chapter to it or something. I really like it. Keep it up!

I really liked this. It's so cute! :D I like the character progression too, the changes in how Ryoma has become a little more easy going since growing up, and how Fuji seems a little more relaxed.

Mhm~ Cute, simple, well written; awesome ficcie~ :) Loved the character interaction and Fuji as an art student is something I can picture. Love this, and Akame is love~ ^^ (Although, I like Jin better than Kame for some reason.)

Keep up the good job~

So, who won the tennis match? Or what was the score?

Nice, although Ryoma could hardly have kept on playing with Angela if he had run off to France. The poetry just leaps off the page, although some mistakes jarred it. But, despite the list of mistakes below (which you can skip over), there are really more good things than bad things. (That's why the review is so long)

Mistakes (mostly the ones that jumped out and screamed at me; I may have missed a few):

After three years in Paris of talking nothing but French and English, I’d expect to find myself pretty fluent at it,

It should be "speaking". Normally I'm not this nitpicky, but "talking" just jarred the poetry of the piece.

He sighs and complains to the amused boy about the competitions.

Just "He sighs and complains to the amused boy." should be enough, because we have read what he is saying, and we know that there are competitions. It still reads a little strangely though- but less strangely.

because it feels like it is the fakest smile that he has ever plastered on.

It reads amateurishly. I can't really say why.

A woman is looking at him a little anxiously,

Why is Claire anxious? She could be looking at him in askance, in curiosity, but anxiously?

“Ryoma.”
“Why are you here, Ryoma?” She asks politely.

In Japan they would give their surnames first- it is quite OoC for him to give "Ryoma" to a person he hardly knows; he would probably give "Echizen" What language is their conversation taking place in anyway? French?

“All right, I’ll bring you to his room – wait, let me tell the professor I’ve got to take a break - ”

She's just left the room! Why would she need to tell him that's she taking a break?

“Oh, dash it!”

What a swearword. Rather OoC. Hardly anyone uses it in real life too! 0.o

Ryoma rather likes making Fuji jealous.

He made Fuji jealous, so it's a question of poor tense here. Ryoma rather likes having made Fuji jealous. Or something.

End of criticism- again, let me say that I liked this piece all the same- your words flow off the page and into the brain.

really good :D