"pull on some pants, think about watching some **"

seriously. you please me. and i love the way you write roxas!

I liked this. It was short, but it made me smile :D Nice job

I kind of love this fic. Maybe.

Okay, okay. That was a terrible joke. But really, I loved it.

You associate them with sunsets because the two of them are always watching sunsets atop the clocktower in Twilight Town.

Heh, i dunno, it was... cute? I like the pace, and for some readon it made me laugh a little to myself, after all, i kind of like it. Maybe.

Its fun to read something where Axel is not head over hills dying of love. Unusual. but a god unusual :)

i love ya man,
always have, always will.

even something short like this is rip-roarin' fantastic. you write simply but beautifully.
i'm sure you get that a lot, but i've never said a truer statement.

LOVE~

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...Amazing. Roxas is so straight forward it kind-of throws you for a loop, but Axel is SO CUTE. And it's rare to think of Axel as 'cute' anymore. I like that you capture what I feel is pivotal in their relationship; that it isn't really a relationship. Neither of them really know what to say, but they know what's okay to do and they know their boundaries.

... I'm rambling. But it was superb! I'm sure no one will mind if you elaborate on this a bit further. |D

You associate 'em with sunsets because of the colors. ^^ And if it's not love yet, it will be soon.

Aww... I have such a soft spot for 2nd person PoV fics. X3

That's a little depressing though. :(

Gah. Hurr... It's a little hard to read because of the paragraph spacing, but other than that, I thought it was spretty enjoyable. :D


-Minikimii

That was pretty cool.

The spaces between the paragraphs are off, but I really liked the story.

He loves the kid, maybe? I like that.

Great job, I hope to see more writing from you soon!