| Reviews for Fate's Gambit |
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Fibinaci 7/12/09 . chapter 1Yay! a happier beginning for Harry and adults acting like adults! Two things I often enjoy in stories. i liked his encoutner with Luna, it seemed just right for two kids their age. |
tick-toc-tick 7/12/09 . chapter 1I loved the bed size comment. Luna is one of my favorite characters and I truly enjoy your portrayal of her. I hope to see more soon. |
ILoveGeorgeEads 7/12/09 . chapter 1i loved it.i can't wait to see Vernon and Dumbledore's reaction when they find out That Harry is no longer at Privet Drive.i can't wait to see Vernon's reaction when he finds that he and Petunia have been arrested on child abuse and endagerment charges and that it's all Dudley's fault. |
notpobhonestly 7/12/09 . chapter 1yay for bubba, keep it coming lets see if you can make it 4 for 4. theres a can of irn bru and a few old vhs vid of supergran if you do |
Sorvik 7/12/09 . chapter 1Excellent Start! I was about to stop at the HedwigPhoenix (not on my list of great story types) but I am glad I kept going. I can't wait for more, keep it coming! |
Firestar-Merlin 7/12/09 . chapter 1Great beginning. |
Su-33 7/12/09 . chapter 1Ah! More More More More! |
ROBERT-19588 7/12/09 . chapter 1Great story. I hope this story will continue till Harry is old and has a large family. When Harry & Hermione & Luna get older I would like to see them marry each other. I hope DumbleDORK gets sent to pull HARD labor in the Goblin mines. I hope Dobby will show up in this story soon. I am glad Hedwig showed up early in the story and that she is a phoenix in this stoory The one thang I do not get is when Harry went shoping, he did not goto Gringotts first to get money. Looking for more of the story. |
loonyXtune 7/12/09 . chapter 1great story! sad, but great! please update soon! |
melferd 7/12/09 . chapter 1Oops, poor Dursleys! I have always felt uncomfortable with JKR's rather 'jolly' treatment of Harry's abusive relatives. I felt she wrote it with a Dickens tonuge-in-cheek humor, which is never appropriate when writing about kids. It's a relief to see it addressed sensibly. I'm all for seeing poor Harry catch a wave from Fate, rather than remaining her "Bubba". Thanks for an awesome start. |
Anime Princess 7/12/09 . chapter 1It's about time that Fate got off the patuckus and helped Harry out! I LOVE that he's at the Manor and the Dumbles doesn't know about it yet! And the Dursleys are getting the old one two punch in their 'normal' lives! YEAH! And now Hedwig is a Pheonix! GREAT! And Luna is his friend, this is awesome! POST MORE ASAP! When will he meet his other friends? And will the Weasleys be friends or not in this fic? POST MORE ASAP! Love ya, Sam |
happylady 7/12/09 . chapter 1This is starting off to be a very good read, So please post more soon. Until next time Gloria |
BARON2462 7/12/09 . chapter 1Wow what a great start to this story i can't wait to read the next chapter. I have read all your stories and have enjoyed each one very much you are a wonderful writer and i love the pairings you come up with. hermione and luna are two of my favorite characters so i am looking forward to reading this you for all the time and hard work you put into all yors stories. |
shanesdragon 7/12/09 . chapter 1VERY GOOD AND HAVING DUDDERS TELL THEM EVERYTHING GENIUS |
imgonnadie 7/12/09 . chapter 1Excellent start to your story |